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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. e530V
The expansion of human activity is increasing day by day which impact the lives of the animals and the plants. Some people argued that human activity would not be stopped whereas other think that if we want to stop this process we have to take some measurements. This essay discuss both view in trailed paragraphs along with my opinion at the end. Starting with, new towns and cities are being constructed day by day owing to this, forest area are cutting day by day. For instance, population is increasing nowadays because of that mankinds have to build residential areasfor humans. Furthermore, wild animals are hunted by humans for their personal profit such as for food as well as leather which has its own value. Instead of preventing population explosion, government is more focused on cutting down the trees. Therefore, all there factors have negative impact on the environment. On the other hand, by implementating some measurements, thus issues can be reduced. First and foremost, construction of residential area should be done on suitable places where it is not near any reservoir or forest area which would lower the negative impact. Additionally, hunting of animals should be prevented. Unless, implementation of strict law by government, mankind would hunt animals for their benefits. By agglomerating all the points elaborated above it can be concluded that, although, plants and animals have unpleasant effects by human activities, by implementing some measurements it can be effective to tackle this issue.
The expansion of
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human
activity is increasing day by day which impact the
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lives
of the
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animals
and the plants.
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people
argued that
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human
activity would not be
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stopped
whereas other
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think
that if we want to
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stop
this process we
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have to
take
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some
measurements.
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This essay discuss
both view in trailed paragraphs along with my opinion at the
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end
.

Starting with, new towns and cities are
being constructed
day by day owing to this, forest area are cutting day by day.
For instance
, population is increasing nowadays
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because
of that
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mankinds
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have to
build residential
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areasfor
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humans
.
Furthermore
, wild
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animals
are hunted
by
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humans
for their personal profit such as for food
as well
as leather which has its
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own
value.
Instead
of preventing population explosion,
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government
is more focused on cutting down the trees.
Therefore
, all there factors have
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negative
impact on the environment.

On the other hand
, by
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implementating
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some
measurements,
thus
issues can be
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reduced
.
First
and foremost, construction of residential area should
be done
on suitable places where it is not near any reservoir or forest area which would lower the
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negative
impact.
Additionally
, hunting of
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animals
should be
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prevented
. Unless, implementation of strict law by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, mankind would hunt
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animals
for their benefits.

By agglomerating all the points elaborated above it can
be concluded
that, although, plants and
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animals
have unpleasant effects by
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human
activities, by implementing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
measurements it can be effective to tackle this issue.
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IELTS essay Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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