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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that This cannot be changed. While others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that This cannot be changed. While others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. RGMP
From the last few decades, the number of plants and animals are decreased. while so many species are endangered due to the detrimental actions of human beings. Although there are a few people who believe that there is nothing to be changed, unlikely them, I agree there are a lot of things that we can do to bring awareness among people to bring a change. Humans are becoming more dangerous than any other animal in the world. Our activities are leading to the extinction of animals and plants. The population is increasing day by day and we are slaughtering animals to feed raising amount of mouths. In addition to that, the demand for luxurious products such as leather belts, shoes, leather jackets, clothes, and products that are made by animal skin or any other parts are climbed up. Moreover, people are cutting-off tress for the construction of houses on hilltops and mountains and also for extension of cities and towns. In fact, we are not so far from what some people think it is nothing to change if the killing of trees as well as the slaughtering of animals continues. However, there is still to change the present situation and we can stop if people along with the government made some precautions to cease the bad activities of humans. for instance, The people who find pleasure in hunting animals should stop and banned. If anyone causes harm or kill animals should be penalized or if required sentence imprisonment. Governments from different countries should meet up and make plans to do their best to save the environment and it will not possible unless people held responsible and participate in activities to make changes. In conclusion, there is still time to take the initiative for stopping the cruel acts of humans. The people from all over the world should have a commitment to save the planet and also god's creation.
From the last few decades, the number of plants and
animals
are decreased
.
while
so
many
species
are endangered
due to the detrimental actions of human beings. Although there are a few
people
who believe that there is nothing to be
changed
, unlikely them, I
agree
there are
a lot of
things that we can do to bring awareness among
people
to bring a
change
.

Humans are becoming more
dangerous
than any other
animal
in the world. Our activities are leading to the extinction of
animals
and plants. The population is increasing day by
day and
we are slaughtering
animals
to feed raising amount of mouths.
In addition
to that, the demand for luxurious products such as leather belts, shoes, leather jackets, clothes, and products that
are made
by
animal
skin or any other parts
are climbed
up.
Moreover
,
people
are cutting-off tress for the construction of
houses
on hilltops and mountains and
also
for extension of cities and towns. In fact, we are not
so
far from what
some
people
think
it is nothing to
change
if the killing of trees
as well
as the slaughtering of
animals
continues.

However
, there is
still
to
change
the present
situation and
we can
stop
if
people
along with the
government
made
some
precautions to cease the
bad
activities of humans.
for
instance, The
people
who find pleasure in hunting
animals
should
stop
and banned. If anyone causes harm or kill
animals
should
be penalized
or if required sentence imprisonment.
Governments
from
different
countries should
meet
up and
make
plans to do their best to save the environment and it
will not possible
unless
people
held responsible and participate in activities to
make
changes
.

In conclusion
, there is
still
time to take the initiative for stopping the cruel acts of humans. The
people
from all over the world should have a commitment to save the planet and
also
god's creation.
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IELTS essay Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that This cannot be changed. While others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

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