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How to deal with people who strongly disagrees with your statement. Discuss your point of view

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Humans are social creatures, therefore we always convey our emotions, beliefs, feelings to another and influence each other's perspective and ideas. Every individual has their own perspective and opinion on numerous of different thing based on their religion, culture, parenting and personal experience. Thus it is common for people to impose their personal beliefs on others when a personality clash occurs. I firmly believe that it is impossible to control or change one's personal viewpoint. In this essay, I will discuss how I handle with a personality clash. To begin with, be respectful of other's personal belief and put yourself in their position to look at other's point of view. Seeing things from another's perspective will broaden your horizon and able to discuss things from different angles. The inability to see things from another person's eyes leads to disagreement. So put yourself together and accept people as they are. And draw the line about imposing your personal viewpoint on people. Once you analyse other's attitude, it will be easier to get to an agreement. Pursuing this further, make your point clear. Be concise and speak directly. Because speaking innuendo causes misunderstanding. Just because another person doesn't agree with you, it doesn't mean that you have to change your personal opinion. Having a personal statement plays a major role in our life. Because it demonstrates who you are. For this reason stick to your belief. To sum it all up, one's position could be different from your personal statement and personal opinions cannot be considered right or wrong.
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we always convey our emotions, beliefs, feelings to another and influence each
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other's
perspective and
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ideas
. Every individual has
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own
perspective and opinion on numerous of
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different
thing based on their religion, culture, parenting and
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personal
experience.
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Thus
it is common for
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people
to impose their
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personal
beliefs on others when a personality clash occurs. I
firmly
believe that it is impossible to control or
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change
one's
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personal
viewpoint. In this essay, I will discuss how I handle with a personality clash.

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begin
with, be respectful of
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other's
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personal
belief and put yourself in their position to look at
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other's
point of view. Seeing things from another's perspective will broaden your horizon and able to discuss things from
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different
angles. The inability to
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see
things from another person's eyes leads to disagreement.
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So
put yourself together and accept
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people
as they are. And draw the line about imposing your
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personal
viewpoint on
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people
. Once you
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other's
attitude, it will be easier to
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get
to an agreement.

Pursuing this
further
,
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another person doesn't
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agree
with you, it doesn't mean that you
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have to
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change
your
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opinion. Having a
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personal
statement plays a major role in our life.
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Because
it demonstrates who you are.
For this reason
stick to your belief.

To sum it all up, one's position could be
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different
from your
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personal
statement and
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opinions cannot
be considered
right or
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wrong
.
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IELTS essay How to deal with people who strongly disagrees with your statement. Discuss your point of view

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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