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How did people communicate with friends in the past? How do they communicate now? Has this changed?

How did people communicate with friends in the past? How do they communicate now? Has this changed? d58w7
In the past, the best way for people to communicate was face to face. Then with the invention of paper, they started to write messages to their friends and family. In addition, they used animals such as pigeons to convey their messages, but it took a long time for a message to reach its destination and occasionally messages got lost. Over time, the means of communication has changed. Currently, people communicate using cell phones, emails, SMS and in many other ways.
In the past, the best way for
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to communicate was face to face. Then with the invention of paper, they
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started
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messages
to their friends and family.
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, they
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used
animals such as pigeons to convey their
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messages
,
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but
it took a long time for a
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message
to reach its destination and
occasionally
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messages
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got
lost. Over time, the means of communication has
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changed
.
Currently
,
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people
communicate using cell phones, emails, SMS and in
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IELTS essay How did people communicate with friends in the past? How do they communicate now? Has this changed?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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