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Helping people around you

Helping people around you VBQlQ
This might trigger some of you so please dont read or @ me. No one in this world wants to see people or animals suffer (it can be disability poverty disease or they may not look really pretty) unless of course you lost your humanity and don't have a heart. Well what i wanna say here is if you post something on the internet asking people to hit like for that person please dont do that. People will support them but your likes will not help anyone. Dont post such things just for the likes on the internet! ! ! And dont record them! ! Dont make them feel bad and uncomfortable. If you're helping them it's a good thing but don't post it for fame or likes. Have some humanity. If you wanna share it do it properly. Ask their permission share only to help them. If you help someone you should thank that person you're helping because they're giving you an opportunity to do a good deed. God will bless you and also thank god that you're blessed enough to be able to help someone. You could be that person too. Help people more and more. But do it properly. Do it for yourself. Dont show that to others.
This might trigger
some
of you
so
please
dont
read or @ me.

No one in this world wants to
see
people
or animals suffer (it can be disability poverty
disease or
they may not look
really pretty
) unless
of course
you lost your humanity and don't have a heart.

Well what i
wanna
say here is if you post something on the internet asking
people
to hit
like
for that person
please
dont
do that.
People
will support them
but
your
likes
will not
help
anyone.
Dont
post such things
just
for the
likes
on the internet! ! ! And
dont
record them! !
Dont
make
them feel
bad
and uncomfortable. If you're helping them it's a
good
thing
but
don't post it for fame or
likes
. Have
some
humanity.
If
you
wanna
share it do it
properly
. Ask their permission share
only
to
help
them. If you
help
someone you should thank that person you're helping
because
they're giving you an opportunity to do a
good
deed. God will bless you and
also
thank god that you're blessed
enough
to be able to
help
someone. You could be that person too.
Help
people
more and more.
But
do it
properly
. Do it for yourself.
Dont
show
that to others.
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IELTS essay Helping people around you

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
211 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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