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Heart, the human pumping beast

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The heart is a muscular organ in most animals, which pumps blood through the blood vessels of the circulatory system. [1] The pumped blood carries oxygen and nutrients to the body, while carrying metabolic waste such as carbon dioxide to the lungs. [2] In humans, the heart is approximately the size of a closed fist and is located between the lungs, in the middle compartment of the chest. [3] In humans, other mammals, and birds, the heart is divided into four chambers: upper left and right atria and lower left and right ventricles. [4][5] Commonly the right atrium and ventricle are referred together as the right heart and their left counterparts as the left heart. [6] Fish, in contrast, have two chambers, an atrium and a ventricle, while reptiles have three chambers. [5] In a healthy heart blood flows one way through the heart due to heart valves, which prevent backflow. [3] The heart is enclosed in a protective sac, the pericardium, which also contains a small amount of fluid. The wall of the heart is made up of three layers: epicardium, myocardium, and endocardium. [7]
The
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heart
is a muscular organ in most animals, which pumps
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blood
through the
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blood
vessels of the circulatory system. [1] The pumped
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blood
carries oxygen and nutrients to the body, while carrying metabolic waste such as carbon dioxide to the lungs. [2] In humans, the
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heart
is approximately the size of a closed fist and
is located
between the lungs, in the middle compartment of the chest. [3]

In humans, other mammals, and birds, the
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heart
is divided
into four chambers: upper
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left
and
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right
atria and lower
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left
and
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right
ventricles. [4][5]
Commonly
the
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right
atrium and ventricle
are referred
together as the
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right
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heart
and their
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left
counterparts as the
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left
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heart
. [6] Fish,
in contrast
, have two chambers, an atrium and a ventricle, while reptiles have three chambers. [5] In a healthy
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heart
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blood
flows one way through the
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heart
due to
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valves, which
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prevent
backflow. [3] The
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heart
is enclosed
in a protective sac, the pericardium, which
also
contains a
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small
amount of fluid. The wall of the
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heart
is made
up of three layers:
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epicardium
, myocardium, and
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endocardium
. [7]
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IELTS essay Heart, the human pumping beast

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185 words
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