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Have Americans taken casual dressing too far? Why/Why not?

Have Americans taken casual dressing too far? Why/Why not? QLn3L
Some people believe that European clothing style is the one we should adopt and appreciate, others instead, argue the American casual dressing style is the best choice in any circumstances. I personally believe the Americans didn’t take casual dressing style too far, for few reasons: First, the casual dressing style is very comfortable. Whether is at workplace, cinema, restaurant, or in holiday, the casual dressing is the preferable style for the majority of people. I always choose to outwear a pair of jeans with a casual shirt and maybe, sometimes, I add jacket over it, depending o. . .
Some
people
believe that European clothing
style
is the one we should adopt and appreciate, others
instead
, argue the American
casual
dressing
style
is the best choice in any circumstances. I
personally
believe the Americans didn’t take
casual
dressing
style
too far, for few reasons:

First
, the
casual
dressing
style
is
very
comfortable. Whether is at workplace, cinema, restaurant, or in holiday, the
casual
dressing
is the preferable
style
for the majority of
people
. I always choose to outwear a pair of jeans with a
casual
shirt and maybe,
sometimes
, I
add
jacket over it,
depending
o.
.
.
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IELTS essay Have Americans taken casual dressing too far? Why/Why not?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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