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Greece #Metoo: Women ending silence of sport abuse shake Greece

When former Olympic champion Sofia Bekatorou revealed she had been sexually assaulted by an unnamed Hellenic Sailing Federation (HSF) executive, few realised her powerful testimony would prompt a #Metoo movement in Greek sport. She was addressing a little-advertised online conference after all. But when the sailing federation hit back at her allegations the following day, the whole story exploded. It said it had never received any complaint from Bekatorou and essentially asked her to name the man, since she had "taken the initiative to speak about this unpleasant incident after so many years". Inspired by Sofia Bekatorou's courage and angered by the federation's cynicism, more athletes began going public with experiences of sexual harassment and abuse using the hashtag #metisofia (on Sofia's side). Now the Greek president has praised the former champion for ending a "conspiracy of silence" and the government says her story has shaken not just sport but society as a whole.
When former Olympic champion Sofia
Bekatorou
revealed she had been
sexually
assaulted by an unnamed Hellenic Sailing Federation (HSF) executive, few
realised
her powerful testimony would prompt a #
Metoo
movement in Greek sport.

She was addressing a
little
-advertised online conference
after all
.

But
when the sailing federation hit back at her allegations the following day, the whole story exploded. It said it had never received any complaint from
Bekatorou
and
essentially
asked her to name the
man
, since she had
"
taken the initiative to speak about this unpleasant incident after
so
many
years
"
.

Inspired by Sofia
Bekatorou
's courage and angered by the federation's cynicism, more athletes began going public with experiences of sexual harassment and abuse using the hashtag #
metisofia
(on Sofia's side).
Now
the Greek president has praised the former champion for ending a
"
conspiracy of silence
"
and the
government
says her story has shaken not
just
sport
but
society as a whole.
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IELTS essay Greece #Metoo: Women ending silence of sport abuse shake Greece

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