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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement? PPpp
Nowadays, it is important for people to be able to travel from one place to another without worrying about the mode of transportation or on how they will arrive in their destination. I do agree that having the government construct more railway systems in countries would make it easier for people to travel safely and less hassle. By building new transportation services for the public it can solve problems that countries are experiencing like traffic congestion, lack of transportation in rural areas, and environmental friendly public utilities. For example, in the Philippines, traffic is one of the many problems the country is facing given that their are a lot of different kinds of transportation services available. It is still difficult for commuters to get from work without being late or leaving home early just to catch a ride to work. If the government would be able to offer alternative way for people such as railways, it can lessen the time needed to travel and places tat are hard to reach can be found easily. It would also help preserve the environment since it will lessen the usage of cars that emits pollution. Therefore, having railways would improve the form of living in countries which can result to better living.
Nowadays, it is
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to be able to travel from one place to another without worrying about the mode of
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transportation
or on how they will arrive in their destination.

I do
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that having the
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government
construct more railway systems in
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countries
would
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it easier for
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people
to travel
safely
and less hassle. By building new
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transportation
services for the public it can solve problems that
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countries
are experiencing like traffic congestion, lack of
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transportation
in rural areas, and environmental friendly public utilities.

For example
, in the Philippines, traffic is one of the
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problems the
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country
is facing
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services available. It is
still
difficult for commuters to
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get
from work without being late or leaving home early
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to catch a ride to work. If the
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government
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would be
able to offer alternative way for
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such as railways, it can lessen the time needed to travel and places tat are
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to reach can
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easily
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preserve the environment since it will lessen the usage of cars that emits pollution.

Therefore
, having railways would
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improve
the form of living in
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which can result to better living.
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IELTS essay Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
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209 words
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