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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The authorities of our nation ought to invest tremendous amount of finance in the railway system more than the land transport. I completly agree with this oppinion because of the manifold benefits in the social and enviornmental fields. First of all, it is exetremely good way to promote and invest funds for a improved rail way system. What i intend to say that, it place a significant role in the stumbling rock of accidental death rates in the terittory, as a consequence of harsh driving and violation of traffic legislation, which was encountered a problem from the land transportation. A good illustration for this is, provide a better experience and gave awareness about the pitfall areas of the road transport. Consequently, people they ensure their safe journey in the daily life. For instance, a seminar plan to exicute in the college areas, whic was mainly concentrated in the adequate strategies to combat the problem by choosing rail system. On the other hand, pursue a positive movement in railway system, to put it another way, road journey place a paramount role in the enviornemental pollution. Which was caused by the large amount of vechicles run on the streets. Neverthless, promoting railway as a first priority it will eradicate and suddenly slumt or mitigate the enviornmental polllution that caused by the high scale of vechicles in the country by emmit fuel gases from the for wheel vechicles. A good illustration for this is, if the most of the people choose railway for travel, subsequently, a infer in the utilization of their own vechicles or private one. As a result, this will lead to reduction of environmental pollution, which was caused by the vechicles. In conclusion, it was a good positive movement for the public and enviornment by providng more economy to the improvement of railway system. This will eradicate all the detrimental part of the road system. As well as, it advances a healthy enviornment for future.
The authorities of our nation ought to invest tremendous amount of finance in the
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system
more than the land transport. I
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completly
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oppinion
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of the manifold benefits in the social and
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enviornmental
fields.

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, it is
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exetremely
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good
way to promote and invest funds for
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a
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improved
rail way
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system
. What
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i
intend to say that, it
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place
a significant role in the stumbling rock of accidental death rates in the
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terittory
, as a consequence of harsh driving and violation of traffic legislation, which
was encountered
a problem from the land transportation. A
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good
illustration for this is, provide a better experience and gave awareness about the pitfall areas of the road transport.
Consequently
,
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people
they ensure their safe journey in the daily life.
For instance
, a seminar plan to
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exicute
in the college areas,
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whic
was
mainly
concentrated in the adequate strategies to combat the problem by choosing rail system.

On the other hand
, pursue a
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positive
movement in
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railway
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system
, to put it another way, road journey place a paramount role in the
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enviornemental
pollution.
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Which
was caused
by the large amount of
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vechicles
run on the streets.
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Neverthless
, promoting
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railway
as a
first
priority it will eradicate and
suddenly
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slumt
or mitigate the
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enviornmental
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polllution
that caused by the high scale of
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vechicles
in the country by
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emmit
fuel gases from the for wheel
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vechicles
. A
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good
illustration for this is, if the most of the
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people
choose
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railway
for travel,
subsequently
,
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a
infer in the utilization of their
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own
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vechicles
or private one.
As a result
, this will lead to reduction of environmental pollution, which
was caused
by the
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vechicles
.

In conclusion
, it was a
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good
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positive
movement for the public and
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enviornment
by
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providng
more economy to the improvement of
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railway
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system
. This will eradicate all the detrimental part of the road
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system
.
As well
as, it advances a healthy
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enviornment
for future.
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IELTS essay Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. with this statement?

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4 paragraphs
325 words
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