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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend.It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

Undoubtedly, owing to advancements in various sectors is considered to be hazardous. It is often argued that the rate of genetic engineering immensely increasing in today's era is a symbol of harmful phenomenon and it ought to be tackled. I am in partially consummate accord with this assertion that it has a detrimental effect and I expound the reasons in upcoming paragraphs. To embark with, why genetic engineering is destructive trend due to some facts. One of the most aspects is that some people used this way illegally. To elaborate more, with genetic engineering folks get others strong characters which contribute to more crimes issues in communities. The other pivotal issue is that in current days it used in agriculture purpose which means it reduces the negative impacts on crops from insects. To cite an instance, by using this method cultivation of crops incline very easily without any harmful effects from insects, but it leads to break the food chain of biodiversity, and their bad effects arises for both animals and human. However, genetic engineering has some positive benefits as well. The preponderant fact is that it aid for better economic development namely as farming field. To put it in other words, the usage of genes people cultivate vegetables and fruits according to their own choices. For an instance, some fruits such as mango or Apple we can grow in any season in spite of their specific needed climate, and it is possible now because of genetic engineering. Not only this, this method is fruitful for human's health also which means doctors change patient's genes and overcome there health hassles by using this method. To wrap up, it can be restated that exchange of genes is a serious harmful issue. But according to my prospective, it is a major problem but people get some benefits form this method as well.
Undoubtedly
, owing to advancements in various sectors
is considered
to be hazardous. It is
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often
argued that the rate of
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genetic
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engineering
immensely
increasing in
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today
's era is a symbol of harmful phenomenon and it ought to
be tackled
. I am in
partially
consummate accord with this assertion that it has a detrimental effect and I expound the reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

To embark with, why
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genetic
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engineering
is destructive trend due to
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some
facts. One of the most aspects is that
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some
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people
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used
this way
illegally
. To elaborate more, with
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genetic
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engineering
folks
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get
others strong characters which contribute to more crimes issues in communities. The other pivotal issue is that in
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current
days it
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used
in agriculture purpose which means it
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reduces
the
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negative
impacts on crops from insects. To cite an instance, by using this method cultivation of crops incline
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very
easily
without any harmful effects from insects,
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but
it leads to break the food chain of biodiversity, and their
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bad
effects arises for both animals and human.

However
,
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genetic
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engineering
has
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some
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positive
benefits
as well
. The preponderant fact is that it aid for better economic development
namely
as farming field. To put it
in other words
, the usage of genes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
cultivate vegetables and fruits according to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
choices. For an instance,
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some
fruits such as mango or Apple we can grow in any season
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in spite of
their specific needed climate, and it is possible
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now
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because
of
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genetic
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engineering
. Not
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only
this, this method is fruitful for human's health
also
which means doctors
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change
patient's genes and overcome there health hassles by using this method.

To wrap up, it can
be restated
that exchange of genes is a serious harmful issue.
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But
according to my prospective, it is a major problem
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but
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people
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get
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some
benefits form this method
as well
.
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IELTS essay Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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