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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry, and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point where all the world’s fossil fuels will be lost. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry, and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point where all the world’s fossil fuels will be lost. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? g2XD
Fossil fuels are necessary for the production of electricity, industries producing electrical and mechanical power as well as to operate the fuel-dependent modes of transport. It is believed that soon the world will run out of fossil fuel supplies. Some ways of conserving these reserves will be discussed in the upcoming stanzas and some substitutes to these non-renewable assets will also be highlighted thereafter. To initiate with, fuels have become a part of contemporary lifestyle, thus they are being used up at an alarming rate. There is a dire need to conserve them and many steps can be taken to do so. First of all, we must make use of renewable sources of energy instead of merely exhausting fossil fuels like coal and petroleum. Solar energy and windmills can be used to generate electricity. Cars that run on battery or solar energy are already in making. For instance, in 2008, Tesla Motors released its first electric car. Moreover, masses must also protect non-renewable fuels from fires. Wastage of oil must also be avoided as spillage leads to wastage of a huge amount of oil reserves. Also, the conversion of fossil fuels into efficient forms like CNG is a good way to preserve the unrenewable resources. To continue, as far as alternatives to non-renewable sources of energy are concerned, Biomass was a choice of fuel among masses for centuries before coal and petroleum became available for use. In addition, Hydrogen is one of the world’s most plentiful components, and like biomass energy, its utilization in the power sector is nothing new yet energizing new advancements have put it back to the spotlight. Hydrogen fuel cells can create clean energy for a wide range of sources. They can be utilized in the vehicle area similar to lithium-particle batteries, yet dissimilar to batteries as they don’t run down or need to be charged. Furthermore, Wave Energy, solar energy and whisky can also help in fulfilling the energy demand of the world by using innovative techniques. To sum up, fossil fuels take millions of years to be produced and they are being exhausted worldwide at an alarming rate. It is very important to save them as if we won’t, the world will soon finish them all up.
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are necessary for the production of electricity, industries producing electrical and mechanical power
as well
as to operate the fuel-dependent modes of transport. It
is believed
that
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soon
the
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world
will run out of
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fossil
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fuel
supplies.
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Some
ways of conserving these reserves will
be discussed
in the upcoming stanzas and
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some
substitutes to these non-renewable assets will
also
be highlighted
thereafter.

To initiate with,
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fuels
have become a part of contemporary lifestyle,
thus
they are being
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used
up at an alarming rate. There is a dire need to conserve them and
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many
steps can
be taken
to do
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so
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of renewable sources of
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energy
instead
of
merely
exhausting
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fossil
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fuels
like coal and petroleum. Solar
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energy
and windmills can be
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used
to generate electricity. Cars that run on battery or solar
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energy
are already in making.
For instance
, in 2008, Tesla Motors released its
first
electric car.
Moreover
, masses
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must
also
protect non-renewable
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fuels
from fires. Wastage of oil
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must
also
be avoided
as spillage leads to wastage of a huge amount of oil reserves.
Also
, the conversion of
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fossil
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fuels
into efficient forms like CNG is a
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good
way to preserve the
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unrenewable
resources.

To continue, as far as alternatives to non-renewable sources of
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energy
are concerned
, Biomass was a choice of
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fuel
among masses for centuries
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before
coal and petroleum became available for
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use
.
In addition
, Hydrogen is one of the
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world’s
most plentiful components, and like biomass
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energy
, its utilization in the power sector is nothing new
yet
energizing new advancements have put it back to the spotlight. Hydrogen
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fuel
cells can create clean
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energy
for a wide range of sources. They can
be utilized
in the vehicle area similar to lithium-particle batteries,
yet
dissimilar to batteries as they don’t run down or need to
be charged
.
Furthermore
, Wave
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Energy
, solar
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energy
and
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whisky
can
also
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help
in fulfilling the
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energy
demand of the
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world
by using innovative techniques.

To sum up,
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fossil
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fuels
take millions of years to be
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produced and
they are
being exhausted
worldwide at an alarming rate. It is
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very
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important
to save them as if we won’t, the
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world
will
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soon
finish them all up.
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IELTS essay Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry, and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point where all the world’s fossil fuels will be lost. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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