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foreign language should be teach in kindergaten to wha extend do you agree

foreign language should be teach in kindergaten to wha extend do you agree E9agL

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 others argue, albeit I believe it is widely
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important
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begin
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 as a case in point hinges on.

Moreover
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makes
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when
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people
. For example
, according to clarifying recent research, it had argued that in considering that. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
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danger
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In conclusion
, Despite being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
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 encourage, Therefore
, the upcoming generation will be able to. 