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ought to confidential.
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, the
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aids to build knowledge,
however
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used
for unlawful acts. These arguments need proper
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scrutinisation
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forming


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any
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new
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ideas
can assist students
as well
as employees to acquire amplify
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ideas
.

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use
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information
from
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research
studies not
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in
the competitive exams
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to
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get
mastery over their
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skills
.
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,
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research
related to market identifies potential
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foe business and find measures to ameliorate such predicaments.
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,
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according


to an article published by The
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New
York Times, any
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research
in the particular field confers numerous opportunities to natives to strengthen their background

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knowledge
.

However
,
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sometimes
the fact have remained privilege to special group of researchers to avoid the misuse of particular
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details
. If the whole data will access to everyone then the significant amount of
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information
can
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use
for illegal work such as terrorist activities and there will
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burgeoning
rise in cyber- crimes. On the top of that, a myriad of hurdles may face by secret intelligence that work for detection and remediation of threats to humans.
For instance
, according to one
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research
conducted by The Oxford University, the crime rate
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hashiked
by 20% due to increase access of
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information
to general population
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in past
.

In conclusion
, although availability of data provide
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new
insight to masses
yet
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it's outrageous impacts
on society cannot be
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ignored
,
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,
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that is
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for inhabitants should be interchange with inhabitants.
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IELTS essay Few inhabitants have supposed that it is valuable to exchange the knowledge that may beneficial

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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