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everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a health diet. Do you agree or disagree

everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a health diet. Ey5B
At present many people are vegetarian. there is an ongoing debate wherther vegetarian and non vegetarian not looking at all the aspects. Im Partial accord to vegetarian they to not need to eat non vegetable to have a healthy diet. Different factor have influenced my stand in this matter out of the serval notice observation the first which comes to my mind is that many vegetarian food are minerals and nuritant for health benifits. This view exits because all gain, dryfruit, vegetable are give to so many nuritants and vitamins. As results its surview of life grow health. Furthermore, we cannot igoner the reality that many puplis to believed in milk items are best for health supplyment. This reason is buoyed in the fact that many time pelople are depened in milk. Consequently Its best to good health. Moreover, everyone notice that meat is best suplliments of health. This factor is taken into account as people are alwasy depend in diesless items so many cool city popullation depend on meat eating. However, the obeservation that is meat is not depending food of health is good provied slightly weakenes the above mention arguments. Generally speaking vegetarian is good suppliment of health. To summarize, In the furture population are increased and food sources are decress it would be fortunate people are going and depend on meat for. It is vital to meat and gain equlibium to the vegetable.
At present
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many
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people
are vegetarian.
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there
is an ongoing debate
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wherther
vegetarian and
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non vegetarian
not looking at all the aspects.
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Im
Partial accord to vegetarian they to not need to eat
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non vegetable
to have a healthy diet.

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factor have influenced my stand in this matter out of the
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serval
notice observation the
first
which
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comes
to my mind is that
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many
vegetarian food are minerals and
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nuritant
for
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health
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benifits
. This view exits
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because
all gain,
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dryfruit
, vegetable are give to
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so
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many
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nuritants
and vitamins.
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As
results its
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surview
of life grow
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health
.
Furthermore
, we cannot
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igoner
the reality that
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many
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puplis
to believed in milk items are best for
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health
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supplyment
. This reason
is buoyed
in the fact that
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many time
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pelople
are
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depened
in milk.
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Consequently
Its best to
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good
health.

Moreover
, everyone
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notice
that
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meat
is best
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suplliments
of
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health
. This factor
is taken
into account as
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people
are
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alwasy
depend in
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diesless
items
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so
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many
cool city
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popullation
depend on
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meat
eating.
However
, the
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obeservation
that is
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meat
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is not depending
food of
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health
is
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good
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provied
slightly
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weakenes
the above mention arguments.
Generally
speaking vegetarian is
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good
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suppliment
of health.

To summarize
, In the
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furture
population
are increased
and food sources are
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decress
it would be fortunate
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people
are going and depend on
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meat
for. It is vital to
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meat
and gain
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equlibium
to the vegetable.

IELTS essay everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a health diet.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
236 words
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