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Every year several language die out.Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this point?

Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this point? dRE6
Nowadays a large number of people or cities prefer to learn another languages in the sense that they want to improve their knowledge it is help to them would be intelligent. A languages is mirror which humans see the whole world. On the other hand the most popular language it is the English language. A considerable people want to learn and speak native english language. For illustrate, the common language unites a community. On the other hand when people know not only your native language but also other languages to communicate in especially they feel comfort. For instance, Uzbek nationalities feel comfort while travelling to America as they could speak as well as understang english language well. In addition to this learning another languages help people to migrate a numerous of places for the purpose study or just work. The most powerful tool keep language, not only government but also all countries should unite and expand enormous language schools or companies which is bombarded with a large number of languages. According to scientist all around the whole world 85% people are speaking other languages, precisely the english language. Unfurtunately, it is true that many people do not respect your native language they prefer to speak another language. To be tackle this problem native language will expand by governments. Another point is they would be redouble native language subjects or courses in school. Undoubted today many qualities for people those who are learning lots of language. In conclusion, I absolutely disagree this opinion that several languages die out life will be better. Oppositely if languages enhance, our world will be improve as well as peoples' view would be better than before. Language is only thing which is changing everything to the good side.
Nowadays
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a large number of
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people
or cities prefer to learn another
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languages
in the sense that they want to
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improve
their knowledge it is
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is
mirror which humans
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see
the whole world. On the
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other
hand the most popular
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language
it is the English
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language
. A considerable
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people
want to learn and speak
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native
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english
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language
. For illustrate, the common
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language
unites a community. On the
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other
hand when
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people
know not
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only
your
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native
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language
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but
also
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other
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languages
to communicate in
especially
they feel comfort.
For instance
, Uzbek nationalities feel comfort while travelling to America as they could speak
as well
as
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understang
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english
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language
well.
In addition
to this learning another
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languages
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help
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people
to migrate
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a numerous of
places for the purpose study or
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just
work. The most powerful tool
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keep
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language
, not
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only
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government
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but
also
all countries should unite and expand enormous
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language
schools or
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companies
which
is bombarded
with
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a large number of
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languages
. According to scientist all around the whole world 85%
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people
are speaking
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other
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languages
,
precisely
the
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english
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language
.
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Unfurtunately
, it is true that
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many
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people
do not respect your
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native
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language
they prefer to speak another
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language
. To be tackle this problem
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native
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language
will expand by
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governments
. Another point is they would be
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redouble
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native
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language
subjects or courses in school. Undoubted
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today
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many
qualities for
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people
those who are learning lots of language.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
disagree this opinion that several
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languages
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die
out life will be better.
Oppositely
if
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languages
enhance, our world will be
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improve
as well
as peoples' view would be better than
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before
.
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Language
is
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only
thing which is changing everything to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
side.
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IELTS essay Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. with this point?

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  American English
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