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Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. RBbM
Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. There are several languages in the world that are given huge attention by people of a diverse range of ethnicities. Those include English, Spanish, and Chinese. Given that adults often come to the point of desiring to become successful, which implies knowing different languages, children and teenagers are as well affected by them. To begin with, learning a foreign language increases the chances for better brain development, which can more likely result in a successful life. Foreign languages are better learned during the primary school years, as scientists have proven. Before the neural pathways are completely formed, it is greater to learn languages to not struggle in the future. Moreover, most of the recent practical resources are written in English or other global languages. For using them it is highly recommended that a person also knows the language it is written in. In addition, in secondary school students start learning sciences, which will eventually lead to information interference between new languages and other subjects. Completing the learning of language’s basics in primary school or kindergarten and continuing the practice of it in secondary and higher education is strategically more convenient for students, teachers, and parents. On the other hand, there is a consequence of intensive learning of language in children’s early stages of life. For example, they might feel pressure from teachers as well as parents. The stress of not being able to learn something because of another developed part of the brain can damage a child’s psyche. In consequence, parents should have awareness of a child’s wants and needs not only in their physical state but also mentally. In summary, it is conceivable to let parents teach their offsprings as early as possible. However, it should be held soft and with the child’s desire. To make that work it is necessary to make a play out of learning and motivate them with different techniques.
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from the time they
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, while others believe it is better to wait until a
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child
is at secondary
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. Discuss both views and give your
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languages
in the world that are
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given
huge attention by
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people
of a diverse range of ethnicities. Those include English, Spanish, and Chinese.
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that adults
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to the point of desiring to become successful, which implies knowing
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different
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languages
, children and
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affected
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with,
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learning
a foreign
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language
increases the chances for better brain development, which can more likely result in a successful life. Foreign
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languages
are better learned during the primary
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school
years, as scientists have proven.
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Before
the neural pathways are completely formed, it is greater to learn
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languages
to not struggle in the future.
Moreover
, most of the recent practical resources
are written
in English or
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other
global
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languages
. For using them it is
highly
recommended that a person
also
knows the
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language
it
is written
in.
In addition
, in secondary
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school
students
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start
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learning
sciences, which will
eventually
lead to information interference between new
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languages
and
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other
subjects. Completing the
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learning
of
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language’s
basics in primary
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school
or kindergarten and continuing the practice of it in secondary and higher education is
strategically
more convenient for students, teachers, and parents.

On the
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hand, there is a consequence of intensive
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learning
of
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language
in children’s early stages of life.
For example
, they might feel pressure from teachers
as well
as parents. The
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stress
of not being able to learn something
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because
of another developed part of the brain can damage a
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child’s
psyche. In consequence, parents should have awareness of a
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child’s
wants and needs not
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only
in their physical state
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but
also
mentally.

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parents teach their
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be held
soft and with the
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child’s
desire. To
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make
that work it is necessary to
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make
a play out of
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learning
and motivate them with
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different
techniques.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
355 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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