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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to adress.in other words,we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to adress. in other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. with this opinion. DKko
Over the past decades, environmental disruption has become more and more serious, such as air pollution, increasing rubbish, greenhouse effect, energy shortage, etc. It has been argued whether the only way to tackle environmental problems is to address it at an international level. In my opinion, individual people and courtiers are also important factors which can settle environmental issues, not only rely on international cooperation. To begin with, individual people have positive impacts on environment protection. This is because there are many ways to preserve our environment in daily life. For example, if citizens tend to use cars less frequently, and enjoy the low carbon lifestyle by using bicycles more often, it helps in the reduction of air pollution significantly. Adding to that, if people pay attention to power and water-saving, and use reuse bags instead of plastic bags, all of which contribute to our environment. Therefore, it is meaningful to resolve environment problems at an individual level. In addition, individual countries play a crucial role on environment protection. Countries are able to encourage national industries to produce green products, and also can inculcate environmental-friendly policies. Besides that, individual countries also can design economic development plans in a sustainable way. However, international cooperation also contributes to the environment. There are some certain global environmental problems that rely on international cooperation, such as sand storms, climate change and global warming, all of which affect a large number of countries at the same time, so it is good to set international standards of environmental protection among different countries. In conclusion the, multinational corporations are a smart way to preserve the environment. However, we should not ignore individual countries and people, which also make huge efforts to improve the environment. By doing so we can ensure our world has a sustainable future.
Over the past decades,
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environmental
disruption has become more and more serious, such as air pollution, increasing rubbish, greenhouse effect, energy shortage, etc. It has
been argued
whether the
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only
way to tackle
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environmental
problems is to address it at an
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international
level. In my opinion,
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individual
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people
and courtiers are
also
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important
factors which can settle
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environmental
issues, not
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only
rely on
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international
cooperation.

To
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begin
with,
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individual
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people
have
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positive
impacts on
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environment
protection. This is
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because
there are
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many
ways to preserve our
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environment
in daily life.
For example
, if citizens tend to
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use
cars less
frequently
, and enjoy the low carbon lifestyle by using bicycles more
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often
, it
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helps
in the reduction of air pollution
significantly
. Adding to that, if
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people
pay attention to power and water-saving, and
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use
reuse bags
instead
of plastic bags, all of which contribute to our
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environment
.
Therefore
, it is meaningful to resolve
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environment
problems at an
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individual
level.
In addition
,
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individual
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countries
play a crucial role on
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environment
protection.
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Countries
are able to encourage national industries to produce green products, and
also
can inculcate environmental-friendly policies.
Besides
that,
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individual
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countries
also
can design economic development plans
Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with the adverb for "sustainable"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a sustainable way
.

However
,
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international
cooperation
also
contributes to the
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environment
. There are
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some
certain global
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environmental
problems that rely on
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international
cooperation, such as sand storms, climate
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change
and global warming, all of which affect
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a large number of
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countries
at the same time,
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so
it is
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good
to set
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international
standards of
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environmental
protection among
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different
countries.

In conclusion
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the,
multinational corporations are a smart way to preserve the
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environment
.
However
, we should not
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ignore
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individual
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countries
and
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people
, which
also
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make
huge efforts to
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improve
the
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environment
. By doing
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so
we can ensure our world has a sustainable future.
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IELTS essay Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to adress. in other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. with this opinion.

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