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Environmental Issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishment against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

A long term global challenges in ecosystems, due to Government not increasing the penalties of offenders. In this essay, I will explain my perception that why I partly agree to this topic. The Government should have raised the penalties in order to, reduce the amount of law breaker, In addition to save our Environment. Penalties is vital to stop doing illegal things, and law acts like a tooth. The longer the tooth the more damage can creat, In fact it can create tremendous fear to the criminals, as a result they will stop doing felonious act. The examples of doing this forbidden act is cutting some ancient trees. It’s not only the losing of the tres, but also the history that engrave in it. However, people that involved in this life and death transactions are poor. Government should not only look in the branch of the problem, but also direct on the root. A plethora of people is victim to this issue furthermore, Business man much more gain benefits than the worker. Unfortunate people forcefully doing illegal things, because they have lack of money. This Issue can only be fix as a whole by the Government, which providing assistance to the poor, offering other livelihood programs like farming, fishing and many more agricultural works. To conclude, the Government will resolve the global problem, if they rise the penalties of law break in this way they will afraid to commit crimes. On the other hand lot’s of unfortunate people involved this illegal work, so the Government who the will guide them to the right path.
A long term global challenges in ecosystems, due to
Government
not increasing the penalties of offenders.

In this essay, I will
explain
my perception that why I partly
agree
to this topic.

The
Government
should have raised the penalties in order to,
reduce
the amount of law breaker,
In addition
to save our Environment.

Penalties
is
vital to
stop
doing
illegal things, and law acts like a tooth. The longer the tooth the more damage can
creat
, In fact it can create tremendous fear to the criminals,
as a result
they will
stop
doing
felonious act. The examples of
doing
this forbidden act is cutting
some
ancient trees. It’s not
only
the losing of the
tres
,
but
also
the history that engrave in it.

However
,
people
that involved in this life and death transactions are poor.
Government
should not
only
look in the branch of the problem,
but
also
direct on the root. A plethora of
people
is victim to this issue
furthermore
, Business
man
much more gain benefits than the worker. Unfortunate
people
forcefully
doing
illegal things,
because
they have lack of money.

This Issue can
only
be
fix
as a whole by the
Government
, which providing assistance to the poor, offering other livelihood programs like farming, fishing and
many
more agricultural works.

To conclude
, the
Government
will resolve the global problem, if they rise the penalties of law break in this way they will afraid to commit crimes.
On the other hand
lot’s
of unfortunate
people
involved this illegal work,
so
the
Government
who
the
will guide them to the right path.
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IELTS essay Environmental Issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishment against offenders. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
264 words
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