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English is regarded as global language. The advantages of being global language outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

English is regarded as global language. The advantages of being global language outweigh the disadvantages. do3jr
Presently English is considered as a global language. Most of the countries are having English as their official language. I strongly believe that in the world there should be a universal language for the people. It will increase the chances of settlement and choice of people to immigrate to the desired location. Firstly, if every country has its own language then it will be very difficult for people to move around. Foreigners will not come to visit country due to language barrier. For instance, my friend visited Germany and he is currently living in France. He speaks French and when he visited Germany, people mostly speak German so it was very difficult for him to move around and interact with people in his own language. Most of the countries are having an official language as English so that people around the world can come to study and do the job to settle there. Secondly, there are some drawbacks if English is made a universal language then many of the languages will die. Language plays and important role in a society's culture and heritage. People will forget about their forefather traditions. This will affect the society because their own culture and heritage will become distinct. In conclusion, I believe that the government should include English as a second language. Students should be thought English because it will help them to move anywhere around. Tourists will not hesitate in travelling to different countries which will have a greater impact on the economy of a country as tourism plays a vital role in increasing economic growth. Students can take admission in any country for their higher study and settlement.
Presently
English
is considered
as a global
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language
. Most of the
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countries
are having English as their official
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language
. I
strongly
believe that in the world there should be a universal
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language
for the
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people
. It will increase the chances of settlement and choice of
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people
to immigrate to the desired location.

Firstly
, if every
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country
has its
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own
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language
then it will be
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very
difficult for
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people
to
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move
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around
. Foreigners will not
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come
to visit
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country
due to
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language
barrier.
For instance
, my friend visited
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Germany and
he is
currently
living in France. He speaks French and when he visited Germany,
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people
mostly
speak German
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so
it was
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very
difficult for him to
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move
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around
and interact with
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people
in his
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own
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language
. Most of the
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countries
are having an official
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language
as English
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so
that
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people
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around
the world can
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come
to study and do the job to settle there.

Secondly
, there are
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some
drawbacks if English
is made
a universal
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language
then
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many
of the
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languages
will
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die
.
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Language
plays and
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important
role in a society's culture and heritage.
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People
will forget about their forefather traditions. This will affect the society
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because
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
culture and heritage will become distinct.

In conclusion
, I believe that the
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government
should include English as a second
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language
. Students should be
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thought
English
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because
it will
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help
them to
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move
anywhere
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around
. Tourists will not hesitate in travelling to
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different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
which will have a greater impact on the economy of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
as tourism plays a vital role in increasing economic growth. Students can take admission in any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
for their higher study and settlement.
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IELTS essay English is regarded as global language. The advantages of being global language outweigh the disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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