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The figure illustrates the process of obtaining electricity by means of geothermal energy. Overall the cold water converted into steam by passing through underground hot rocks is consumed by the turbine to rotate generator for electricity production. the cold water at the surface of the earth goes down up to 4. 5 kilometers and enters into the hot rocks area, which takes the form of steam. the steam works as a fuel for the running of the turbine. the turbine connected to the generator in such a way to produce electrical energy. T electricity produced goes down the lines to cities and towns.
The figure illustrates the process of obtaining electricity by means of geothermal energy.
Overall
the
cold
water converted into steam by passing through underground hot rocks
is consumed
by the turbine to rotate generator for electricity production.

the
cold
water at the surface of the earth goes down up to 4. 5 kilometers and enters into the hot rocks area, which takes the form of steam.
the
steam works as a fuel for the running of the turbine.
the
turbine connected to the generator in such a way to produce electrical energy. T electricity produced goes down the lines to cities and towns.
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IELTS essay energy production from water

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
103 words
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