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energy production from water

energy production from water NN2W

The figure illustrates the process of obtaining electricity by means of geothermal energy. Overall the cold water converted into steam by passing through underground hot rocks is consumed by the turbine to rotate generator for electricity production. the cold water at the surface of the earth goes down up to 4. 5 kilometers and enters into the hot rocks area, which takes the form of steam. the steam works as a fuel for the running of the turbine. the turbine connected to the generator in such a way to produce electrical energy. T electricity produced goes down the lines to cities and towns.

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cold
 water converted into steam by passing through underground hot rocks is consumed
 by the turbine to rotate generator for electricity production.

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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water at the surface of the earth goes down up to 4. 5 kilometers and enters into the hot rocks area, which takes the form of steam. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
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 steam works as a fuel for the running of the turbine. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
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 turbine connected to the generator in such a way to produce electrical energy. T electricity produced goes down the lines to cities and towns. 

IELTS essay energy production from water

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American English

2 paragraphs

103 words

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