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Endotherms dinossaurs

Endotherms dinossaurs 9LYln
The reading and the lecture are both about if dinossaurs were endotherms. The author of article feels that dinossaurs differ in many ways from reptiles. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that there is not enough arguments proving dinosaurs are endotherms. According to the reading fossils from dinossaurs were found in polar areas. The article mentions that only endothermic animals that can maintain body temperature can live in cold conditions. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that in that time in the Polar regions the clime was much warmer than today. Additionally, he points out that they could migrate on winter in order to survive. Secondly, the author suggests the position and movement of the legs on endotherms animals. In the article, it is said that the phsical activity of animals that have their legs underneath their body its a carachteristic of animals that are endothermic. The lecturer, however, asserts that legs under body doesnt mean were endotherms. He goes on to say that dinossaurs had an advantage having their legs under body allowing them to carry more weight and grow more. Finally, the author posits that the bone structure from dinossaurs was from endotherms. The author contends that the dense bone allowed them to grow quickly. In contrast, the lecturer stance is that they also had bones called growth rings. He notes that it permited them to stop growing on cooler periods, such as not endotherms animals.
The reading and the lecture are both about if
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dinossaurs
were endotherms. The
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author
of
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article
feels that
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dinossaurs
differ in
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many
ways from reptiles.
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The
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lecturer
disputes the claims made in the
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article
. His position is that there is not
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enough
arguments proving dinosaurs are endotherms.

According to the reading fossils from
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dinossaurs
were found
in polar areas. The
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article
mentions that
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only
endothermic
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animals
that can maintain
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body
temperature can
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live
in
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cold
conditions. This specific argument
is challenged
by the
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lecturer
. He claims that in that time in the Polar regions the clime was much warmer than
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today
.
Additionally
, he points out that they could migrate on winter in order to survive.

Secondly
, the
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author
suggests the position and movement of the
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legs
on endotherms
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animals
. In the
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article
, it
is said
that the
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phsical
activity of
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animals
that have their
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legs
underneath their
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body
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its
a
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carachteristic
of
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animals
that are endothermic. The
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lecturer
,
however
, asserts that
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legs
under
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body
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doesnt
mean were endotherms. He goes on to say that
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dinossaurs
had an advantage having their
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legs
under
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body
allowing them to carry more weight and grow more.

Finally
, the
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author
posits that the bone structure from
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dinossaurs
was from endotherms. The
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author
contends that the dense bone
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allowed
them to grow
quickly
.
In contrast
, the
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lecturer
stance is that they
also
had bones called growth rings. He notes that it
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permited
them to
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stop
growing on cooler periods, such as not endotherms
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animals
.
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IELTS essay Endotherms dinossaurs

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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