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The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake.

The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. E39dQ
Both the reading and the lecture are talking about the procedures than could be used to save the fish in Salton Sea in California. The reading part supports the idea that there are several ways to solve this issues. On the other hand, the lecture opposes this opportunity. First, the passage supports the idea that removing the salt from the lakes' water in special desalination facilities, where the water will be pumped and heated. In this way the water will evaporate into steam and the salt and other materials will be left behind, and the water that will be returned into the sea will be less salty. However, the lecture disagrees with this, because it says when the water will evaporate it will leave behind other chemical materials that could be unhealthy and toxic for the people. For example, said the selenium is toxic and the people can breathe it and it is very danger. Another possible way to reduce the salt from the water given from the reading part is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. But the listening part opposes this, by saying that this method is very expensive and the local government will not have the sources to pay for that construction. Finally, the author gives one more option, to control the lake's salinity by building walls to divide the lake into several areas. In contrast, the lecturer says this method is unlikely to work for so long. She says that there are earthquakes that can destroy the wall and the water from different sections will mix in.
Both the reading and the lecture are talking about the procedures than could be
used
to save the fish in Salton Sea in California. The reading part supports the
idea
that there are several ways to solve this issues.
On the other hand
, the lecture opposes this opportunity.

First
, the passage supports the
idea
that removing the
salt
from the lakes'
water
in special desalination facilities, where the
water
will
be pumped
and heated. In this way the
water
will evaporate into steam and the
salt
and other materials will be
left
behind, and the
water
that will
be returned
into the sea will be less salty.
However
, the lecture disagrees with this,
because
it says when the
water
will evaporate it will
leave
behind other chemical materials that could be unhealthy and toxic for the
people
.
For example
, said the selenium is toxic and the
people
can breathe it and it is
very
danger
.

Another possible way to
reduce
the
salt
from the
water
given
from the reading part is to dilute the
salt
level in the lake with
water
from the ocean.
But
the listening part opposes this, by saying that this method is
very
expensive and the local
government
will not have the sources to pay for that construction.

Finally
, the author gives one more option, to control the lake's salinity by building walls to divide the lake into several areas.
In contrast
, the lecturer says this method is unlikely to work for
so
long. She says that there are earthquakes that can
destroy
the wall and the
water
from
different
sections will mix in.
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IELTS essay The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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