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Effects of the sea north carolina and global warming

Effects of the sea north carolina and global warming 0EGr9
The text is explaining a salty lake in California -Salton sea- which the level of its salt is increasing and giving three solutoins to reduce salt level of it. Then the professor is discussing those solutions and tells those are not realistic solutions. First, the passage offers pumping the lake's water into the facilities and heating it in order to evaporate it into steam to leave the salt left behind; the professor, in contrast, says this solution is really dangerous for people's and animals' health because the evaporated steam includes some toxic chemicals that are harmful for health. Second, the reading section offers to transfer water of the Pacfic ocean into the lake through by pipelines. Professor argues this solution this solution and says this action would cost too much for the governoment to do it and it is not a realistic solution. Finally, the text offers dividing the lake into smaller sections in order to reduce salt level of water in the main section; the professor, however, thinks of this solution as a short-period method to control the salt level of the sea because natural diseases like earthquake might collapse the walls which divided the lake into sections.
The text is explaining a salty
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lake
in California -Salton sea- which the
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level
of its
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salt
is increasing

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and
giving three
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solutoins
to
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reduce
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salt
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level
of it. Then the
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professor
is discussing
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those


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solutions
and
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tells
those are not realistic solutions.

First
, the passage offers pumping the lake's water into the facilities and heating it in order to

evaporate it into steam to
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leave
the
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salt
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left
behind; the
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professor
,
in contrast
, says this solution

is
really
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dangerous
for
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people
's and animals' health
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because
the evaporated steam includes
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some


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toxic
chemicals that are harmful for health.

Second, the reading
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section
offers to transfer water of the
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Pacfic
ocean into the
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lake
through

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by
pipelines.
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Professor
argues
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this solution this solution
and says this action would cost too
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much


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for
the
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governoment
to do it and it is not a realistic solution.

Finally
, the text offers dividing the
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lake
into smaller
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sections
in order to
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reduce
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salt
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level
of

water in the main
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section
; the
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professor
,
however
,
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thinks
of this solution as a short-period

method to control the
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salt
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level
of the sea
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because
natural diseases like earthquake might

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collapse
the walls which divided the
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lake
into
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sections
.
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IELTS essay Effects of the sea north carolina and global warming

Essay
  American English
14 paragraphs
199 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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