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Economic progress is one factor that is being considered to measure the success of a country, but there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors do you think should be considered? Do you think one factor is more important than others? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Economic progress is one factor that is being considered to measure the success of a country, but there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What other factors do you think should be considered? Do you think one factor is more important than others? PB0E
Economic progress plays a vital role in the development of the country. Some people believe economic factors alone are sufficient for a nation to be called as a successful one. However, Other's opine that there are also other factors which constitutes towards the country to be called it as a successful country. To begin with, social factors like free education, basic necessities and better health services also contribute towards the success of the economy. Of all the foresaid factors, the one which is important according to me is basic necessities which comprises of food, shelter and clothing. Every citizen has the right to attain the basic necessities. Free education must be provided for the children upto 6 years of age. Better health services must be provided to all the people. The fee charged must be minimal. Globalisation has brought many changes to the technological development. Firstly, robots have been replaced with humans. Secondly, with this implementation people are able to save more time and effort. Lastly, the business are expanding globally. To conclude, not only economic/monetary progree is important but also social factors also has to be taken into consideration for a country to be called out as a successful one.
Economic progress plays a vital role in the development of the country.
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it as a successful country.

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basic necessities
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according to me is
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basic necessities
which
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. Free education
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to the technological development.
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, with this implementation
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are able to save more time and effort.
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IELTS essay Economic progress is one factor that is being considered to measure the success of a country, but there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What other factors do you think should be considered? Do you think one factor is more important than others?

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