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Driving a car is better than walking.

Driving a car is better than walking. LLVe3
Walking a pedistrain is not more better than driving a vehicle. This essay totally disagree with that most of people prefer who they are driving a car than walking. It is very erorouse choice and their car spreading to environment toxic substance. A lot of people who live in urban town. They are must go to work on time. So very damage to environment. All of the transports using motor oil, fuel and gas. They are and vehicle instruments together very dangerous toxic substance. A large number of scientists affort to lose the problem. For example they are produce electronic car. If all of the transport using electr so always clear and fresh air. Avarage of ten thausand steps a day it is very benefical for the body. One the other hand very good driving car. Becouse very long destination and bad weather. If you are harry up or fatigue and road very long car very fit for you. In conclusion driving car during the day dangerous health than walking.
Walking a
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pedistrain
is not
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more better
than
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driving
a vehicle. This essay
totally
disagree with that most of
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people
prefer who they are
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driving
a
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car
than walking. It is
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very
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erorouse
choice and their
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car
spreading to environment toxic substance.
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A lot of
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people
who
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live
in urban town. They are
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must
go to work on time.
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So
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very
damage to environment.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
transports using motor oil, fuel and gas. They are and vehicle instruments together
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very
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dangerous
toxic substance.
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A large number of
scientists
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affort
to lose the problem. For
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example they
are produce electronic
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car
. If
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all of the
transport using
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electr
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so
always
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clear
and fresh air.
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Avarage
of ten
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thausand
steps a day it is
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very
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benefical
for the body.
Did you mean "on"?
One
the other hand
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very
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good
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driving
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car
.
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Becouse
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very
long destination and
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bad
weather. If you are
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harry
up or fatigue and road
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very
long
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car
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very
fit for you.
In conclusion
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driving
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car
during the day
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dangerous
health than walking.
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IELTS essay Driving a car is better than walking.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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