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Does advertising reflect the culture?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Does advertising reflect the culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. XGo7P
Culture is nothing but the ideas, beliefs, way of living and behaving in the society. Every country has its own customs and culture, and most of the people from that country follow their customs and cultures. I believe, people hardly accept the things which are against their culture, and therefore most of the advertisements are also created by considering the culture of the country. In today’s market, advertisement is one of the most important sources of introducing new products or services. Life of that products or services depends on how it has advertised, because if these are advertised. . .
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customs and
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culture
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people
from that country follow their customs and
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people
hardly accept the things which are against their
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most of the advertisements are
also
created by considering the
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culture
of the country. In
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today
’s market, advertisement is one of the most
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important
sources of introducing new products or services. Life of that products or services depends on how it has advertised,
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if these
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IELTS essay Does advertising reflect the culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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