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Do you prefer to have realistic goals or ambitious goals in life

Do you prefer to have realistic goals or ambitious goals in life g5117
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of setting realistic goals. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to set realistic goals in my life. It is my firm belief that having realistic goals always makes one’s life more practical for a number of reasons, and I will develop my ideas in subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, setting realistic dreams in life always help people to cope the unfavourable circumstances. A person’s life is full of uncertainties; and he could easily lose hope at such unpredictable times of his life if he has not already found a practical solution of them. Besides, these goals guide people to move forward towards a predetermined direction and insure them that they will overcome their difficulties. I have to admit that my own opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. My husband works in USA and he has to commute everyday so we already had set a plan that we would have moved to USA by the February 2020. Just before we were planning to move, pandemic started and borders get closed. It was a critical time for our moving, as we already gave notice for leaving the house. Fortunately, my husband already informed his company about his move. So, his company assisted us to get a permission letter from border authorities. As a result, we came to our destination without any further trouble. For this reason, having a realistic dream permitted my family to make our migration possible, even in pandemic situation. Secondly, practicality motivates us to do hard work and overcomes temporary constraints, which is always fruitful in the end. Drawing from my friend’s experience. She was a foreign Pharmacy graduate, and she has her disabled parents, who were living with her. In a nutshell, she had a great deal of responsibilities, but she has always planned for taking her licensing exam. She tried and failed two consecutive years, but she did not lose hope and continued to be worked hard to achieve her goals. Moreover, she did not let her circumstances to be a hurdle, in her way, of getting her dream and one by one she overcame all her hardships, as now she is a registered pharmacist in United States of America. It is certainly clear that her continuous struggle to achieve her truthful goal never demotivated her and never let her felt discouragement. It was a long run for her but, in the end, she was rewarded with success. In the light of above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that setting realistic goals in life provides the strength to face the unplanned realities of life and it also demonstrates the virtues of hard work to fulfil the ambition
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and
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aspects of setting
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realistic
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goals
. If I
were forced
to choose, I would definitely prefer to set
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realistic
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goals
in my
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life
. It is my firm belief that having
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realistic
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always
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makes
one’s
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more practical for a number of reasons, and I will develop my
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in subsequent paragraphs.

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with, setting
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dreams in
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always
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help
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people
to cope the
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unfavourable
circumstances. A person’s
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life
is full of uncertainties; and he could
easily
lose hope at such unpredictable times of his
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if he has not
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already
found a practical solution of them.
Besides
, these
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goals
guide
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people
to
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move
forward towards a predetermined direction and insure them that they will overcome their difficulties. I
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have to
admit that my
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own
opinion on this matter has been
profoundly
influenced by my
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own
experience. My husband works in
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USA and
he
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commute everyday
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we
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already
had set a plan that we would have
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moved
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to USA
by the February 2020.
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before
we were planning to
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move
, pandemic
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started
and borders
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get
closed. It was a critical time for our moving, as we
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already
gave notice for leaving the
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.
Fortunately
, my husband
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already
informed his
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company
about his
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move
.
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, his
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company
assisted us to
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get
a permission letter from border authorities.
As a result
, we came to our destination without any
further
trouble.
For this reason
, having a
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realistic
dream permitted my family to
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make
our migration possible, even in pandemic situation.

Secondly
, practicality motivates us to do
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hard
work and overcomes temporary constraints, which is always fruitful in the
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end
. Drawing from my friend’s experience. She was a foreign Pharmacy graduate, and she has her disabled parents, who were living with her. In a nutshell, she had a great deal of responsibilities,
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but
she has always planned for taking her licensing exam. She tried and failed two consecutive years,
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but
she did not lose hope and continued to
be worked
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hard
to achieve her
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goals
.
Moreover
, she did not
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let
her circumstances to be a hurdle, in her way, of getting her dream and one by one she overcame all her hardships, as
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now
she is a registered pharmacist
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in United States
of America. It is
certainly
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clear
that her continuous struggle to achieve her truthful
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goal
never demotivated her and never
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let
her felt discouragement. It was a long run for her
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but
, in the
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end
, she
was rewarded
with success.

In the light of above-mentioned reasons, I
strongly
believe that setting
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realistic
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goals
in
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life
provides the strength to face the unplanned realities of
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life
and it
also
demonstrates the virtues of
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hard
work to fulfil the ambition
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IELTS essay Do you prefer to have realistic goals or ambitious goals in life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
460 words
5.5
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