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Archeological artifacts

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In this set of materials, the writer strongly postulates that the department of Archaeology has faced many troubles and complications in Britain during discovery and research on old cultural artifacts which are of great value. On the other hand, the professor explains that in 1990, new rules and regulations have been introduced that brought changes in the field of Archaeology. Also ameliorated the three conditions provided by the author in the passage. First and foremost, the passage begins by asserting that from 1950, there were many building projects going on to accommodate the increasing population of Britain. So many valuable remains of great interest were lost during digging the base of the new structure. Instead of protecting ancient assets from damage, they continued with the construction. In contrast, the speaker states that before construction, the site has to be thoroughly checked in order to find any precious art pieces. If found any, the investors and government officials along with archaeologists should devise a plan to preserve priceless items. They should do it by constructing on either side or completely eliminating the building. Or moreover, record and save it before proceeding further. In fact, the professor further states that the cost of preserving artifacts would be paid by the investors. Also, the expenses of study at the construction site would be paid by constructors. These claims refute the author's implication of insufficient money for archaeological research. The government was paying charges for expenses of the investigation in the twentieth century but, that left other plans incomplete. In addition, the government has declined the funding now. Ultimately, the article wraps its argument by stating that the people who chose archaeology as a profession had trouble finding jobs. And they did not get paid for the study. However, the professor denies this point by declaring that professional archaeologists were hired. They got rewarded for the experimentation and then analyzing records. They also get paid for writing research papers. Furthermore, it states the demand for expert Archaeologists was great.

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many
 troubles and complications in Britain during discovery and research on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 cultural artifacts which are of great value. On the other hand
, the professor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 that in 1990, new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and regulations have been introduced
 that brought This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the field of Archaeology. Also
 ameliorated the three conditions provided by the author in the passage.

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 and foremost, the passage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 by asserting that from 1950, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 building projects going on to accommodate the increasing population of Britain. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 valuable remains of great interest were lost
 during digging the base of the new structure. Instead
 of protecting ancient assets from damage, they continued with the construction.

In contrast
, the speaker states that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 construction, the site This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be thoroughly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 in order to find any precious art pieces. If found any, the investors and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 officials along with archaeologists should devise a plan to preserve priceless items. They should do it by constructing on either side or completely eliminating the building. Or moreover
, record and save it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 proceeding further
.

In fact, the professor further
 states that the cost of preserving artifacts would be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalariedcompensated
paid
 by the investors. Also
, the expenses of study at the construction site would be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalariedcompensated
paid
 by constructors. These claims refute the author's implication of insufficient money for archaeological research. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 was paying charges for expenses of the investigation in the twentieth century This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 other plans incomplete. In addition
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 has declined the funding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Ultimately
, the article wraps its argument by stating that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who chose archaeology as a profession had trouble finding jobs. And they did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalariedcompensated
paid
 for the study. However
, the professor denies this point by declaring that professional archaeologists were hired
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 rewarded for the experimentation and then analyzing records. They also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalariedcompensated
paid
 for writing research papers. Furthermore
, it states the demand for expert Archaeologists was great. 