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Do you have a large family or small family? Can you tell me something about them?

Do you have a large family or small family? Can you tell me something about them? Kw59w

I have a large family consist of 5 brothers, two sisters and my parents. My mother is a senior citizen and my father already deceased. We all having our own family. My first brother he is currently working as electrician and he has five children. My second brother he is managing his farm and has two kids. My third brother he is working in Dubai as bartender in restaurant, he has twins boy and girl. Fourth brother he already died last 2005. My youngest brother is in Saudi Arabia working in restaurant as chef. My eldest sister, she's managing her small grocery business and she has three daughters. My youngest female sibling she also have trading and she has two youngsters. However, I have seven years of age son.

I have a large family consist of 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brothers
, two sisters and my parents. My mother is a senior citizen and my father already deceased.

We all having our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 family. My first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 he is currently
 working as Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).electrician, and
electrician and
 he has five children. My second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 he is managing his farm and has two kids. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 he is working in Dubai as bartender in restaurant, he has twins boy and girl. Fourth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 he already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
 last 2005. My youngest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 is in Saudi Arabia working in restaurant as chef. My eldest sister, she's managing her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 grocery Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).business, and
business and
 she has three daughters. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 youngest female sibling she also
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).trading, and
trading and
 she has two youngsters. However
, I have seven years of age son. 