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Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it

Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it JlGOB
I agree that people don't see their friends as much as they used to. But I don't think email, messaging or any methods of communication have caused that. In my point of view, people's modern lifestyle has caused that. People use their time to work and then come home. They don't have enough time to meet friends. q; wndQ: FLKWn/felKEBNLKwbnegnBEWLGBWE'OGBWEJGBEJGBFWEJKBGFEWBWKJBEGFKU; EBEBGW; WBGEWUBGFW; EOIUBGWOEUGB'
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agree
that
people
don't
see
their friends as much as they
used
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But
I don't
think
email, messaging or any methods of communication have caused that. In my point of view,
people
's modern lifestyle has caused that.
People
use
their time to work and then
come
home. They don't have
enough
time to
meet
friends.
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IELTS essay Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
62 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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