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Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it

Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it JlGOB
I agree that people don't see their friends as much as they used to. But I don't think email, messaging or any methods of communication have caused that. In my point of view, people's modern lifestyle has caused that. People use their time to work and then come home. They don't have enough time to meet friends. q; wndQ: FLKWn/felKEBNLKwbnegnBEWLGBWE'OGBWEJGBEJGBFWEJKBGFEWBWKJBEGFKU; EBEBGW; WBGEWUBGFW; EOIUBGWOEUGB'
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IELTS essay Do you agree that people don't see their friends so much? If so, do you agree that things like email and messaging have caused this, or has something else caused it

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62 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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