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Do you agree or diasgree with: "There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person" ? Include details and examples to support your answer.

Do you agree or diasgree with: " There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person" ? Include details and examples to support your answer. Ajaw1
Although education plays a pivotal role in building cultured communities. However, I totally disagree that uneducated person has nothing to teach to an educated one. The basis of my view are based on several reasons. First of all, an uneducated person can never be depicted of being deprived from morals. A person could be uneducated for whatever reason it is. However, this would never mean that he could not have been raised among a good family, who might have taught him respect, honesty and fedelity as well. For example; there is that uneducated guy whom I know, and who was not able to get a. . .
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
education plays a pivotal role in building cultured communities.
However
, I
totally
disagree that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uneducated
person has nothing to teach to an educated one. The basis of my view
are based
on several reasons.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uneducated
person can never
be depicted
of being
The usual collocation for "deprived" is "of" not "". Did you mean "deprived of"?
deprived from
morals. A person could be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uneducated
for whatever reason it is.
However
, this would never mean that he could not have
been raised
among a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
family, who might have taught him respect, honesty and
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fedelity
as well
.
For example
; there is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
uneducated
guy whom I know, and who was not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
Did you forget something after 'a'?
a.
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.
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.

IELTS essay Do you agree or diasgree with: " There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person" ? Include details and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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