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Dissapereance of languages.

Dissapereance of languages. mWQnr
Some people opine that many languages die. But another part of the population think that it is normal. Is it good or bad that the languages die? This essay is divided into three sections. It will first consider some advantages and disadvantages of languages. It will then continue the discussion. Finally, some conclusions will be drawn. Every day more and more new languages appear. But what about the old languages? So far as is known, in the past, every tribe had their own language. Furthermore, the tribes had different ways of communicating with each other. They can communicate thanks to facial expressions, gestures and others. But civilisations develop every day. New languages appear instead of the old ones. Some old languages survive. Because earlier there were more than 200 languages. People can't learn all of them. So there are languages which are easy to learn. The main thing is that due to languages people can easily communicate with people in different countries. Almost every country has its own language. Due to language you can acquire a new skill, enter to the university, live in another country, learn history and much more. My own view on this matter is that dissapereance of languages is normal. But not all people agree with this. Instead of old languages new ones appear. Some old languages like English or Chinese have now survived and even developed. To draw the conclusion, I can say that everybody has their own view on this topic. If your view was negative, I hope it will change because of this essay. Learn languages because they will be useful in your future jobs.
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,
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conclusions will
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Every day more and more
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new
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appear.
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what about the
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far as
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language
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Furthermore
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different
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and others
.
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learn
all of them.
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there are
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learn
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people
can
easily
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people
in
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different
countries. Almost every country has its
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own
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language
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you can acquire a
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new
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skill
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history and much more. My
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own
view on this matter is that
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is normal.
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not all
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agree
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now
survived and even developed.

To draw the conclusion, I can say that everybody has their
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own
view on this topic. If your view was
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negative
, I hope it will
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change
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Learn
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because
they will be useful in your future jobs.
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IELTS essay Dissapereance of languages.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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