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Dieting can change a person's life for better or ruins one's health completely. What is your opinion?

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Going on diet can change someone's health toward goodness. Although going on diet is good for our overall health, sometimes it could ruins our health. This essay will discuss that how dieting could change our life for better. Going on diet can make us more healthy than ever before. Our health had been struggling for more than thousands of year before doing research on improving our overall health in 19th century. So, scientists reached to a result that fasting (a type of keep diet up until a day) could control our health problems. One example would be my own experience from keep up my first diet, when I was overweight after second month a noticed some changes in my weight. Believe me, I was 78 kilograms before selecting my diet schedule. This reason we claimed that it would be good for our health. Launching diet unnecessarily could have bad effect on your health and can make your health terrible. Sometimes we notice negative changes in our body due to our negative thoughts or may be unnecessarily starting diet. For instance, one of my friends, whom was concerned about his fitness, but it was good at all. So, he started dieting without consulting with any specialist after 90 days he died. then we asked from a specialist about the problem. He investigated about and he replied after 65 days that be is died of bad or terrible nutrition. because of that issue we could claim that it is bad for us to start dieting unnecessarily. Ultimately, It is highly recommended by professional and doctors; we should do whatever our doctor recommends us.
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toward goodness. Although going on diet is
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good
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,
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it could
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health
. This essay will discuss that how dieting could
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change
our life for better. Going on diet can
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make
us more healthy than ever
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before
. Our
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health
had been struggling for more than thousands of year
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before
doing research on improving our
overall
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health
in 19th century.
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So
, scientists reached to a result that fasting (a type of
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keep
diet up until a day) could control our
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health
problems. One example would be my
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own
experience from
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up my
first
diet, when I was overweight after second month a noticed
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some
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changes
in my weight. Believe me, I was 78 kilograms
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before
selecting my diet schedule. This reason we claimed that it would be
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good
for our health.

Launching diet
unnecessarily
could have
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effect on your
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health
and can
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make
your
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terrible.
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we notice
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changes
in our body due to our
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thoughts or may be
unnecessarily
starting diet.
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, one of my friends, whom
was concerned
about his fitness,
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but
it was
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good
at all.
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, he
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started
dieting without consulting with any specialist after 90 days he
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died
.
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then
we asked from a specialist about the problem. He investigated
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about and
he replied after 65 days that be is
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died
of
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or terrible nutrition.
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because
of that issue we could claim that it is
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bad
for us to
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start
dieting
unnecessarily
.
Ultimately
, It is
highly
recommended by professional and doctors; we should do whatever our doctor recommends us.
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IELTS essay Dieting can change a person's life for better or ruins one's health completely. What is your opinion?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
271 words
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