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Dietary experts agree that many people have unhealthy diets

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Dietary experts believe that some people have unhealthy diets. Nowadays, a lot of people have unhealthy diets which include starvation and they do not eat nothing all day. Hunger is not good for the organism and their life and scientists agree with this. They can’t realize that is not the good way to lose weight. This is a growing problem for young women and for some of the teenagers. There is multiple cause of this problem. Perhaps the most important cause of it is the wrong and unhealthy diets do not give all of vitamins and substances for their bodies and for their brain processes. In their diets, humans eat only one time of a day or they actually do not eat anything. Another cause may be people do not do physical exercises and do not practice sports which is unhealthy for their muscles and kilograms. They think it would be easier if they do not do these activities because more of people are lazy or do not have enough time. Furthermore, the third cause for their unhealthy diets can be the yo-yo effect which make them fatter from the beginning. The good diets which helps people to be slimmer are long period of time that can continue weeks or months but in the end there is a good effect and results. There are certain steps which dietary experts recommend. One of them can be eating a lot of vegetables and fruits and drink a lot of liquids. Another possible cause can be going to gym with trainer who can help you for your problem and diet. If people do not have the time which they must spend in gym, dietary experts suggest more walking and using the stairs, not the lift. Once people make this habits for healthy diets and lifestyle they can have more well-being and will be happier and more productive in their work. Since it is possible to happen they will do this like daily routines for the rest of their lives.
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IELTS essay Dietary experts agree that many people have unhealthy diets

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  American English
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