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detrimental effects on the environment do you agree or disagree

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There is no doubt that nowadays people are spending time on leisure activities to re-energize and to relax from regular occupational tasks. Although some people prefer planning leisure time, others firmly believe that impromptu activities are the best way to utilize spare time. This essay makes comparison of the two and chooses the most preferred option. This essay will reinforce my opinion with examples.

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 are spending time on leisure activities to re-energize and to relax from regular occupational tasks. Although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 prefer planning leisure time, others firmly
 believe that impromptu activities are the best way to utilize spare time. This essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 comparison of the two and chooses the most preferred option.

This essay will reinforce my opinion with examples. 