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Describer A PERFECT PLACE TO STUDY

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If you are a book worm and fall in love with a peaceful place, Ho Chi Minh City University of Education's library is one of the best choices. It located at district 5, at the center, with many streets run crazy surround there. In contrast with the busy city, there are several reasons explain why it is a good option. With a pedagogical space, and spacious facilities, HCMUP’s library will bring to you great learning moments.
If you are a book worm and fall in
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with a peaceful place, Ho Chi Minh City University of Education's library is one of the best choices. It located at district 5, at the center, with
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streets run crazy surround there.
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why it is a
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option. With a pedagogical space, and spacious facilities,
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HCMUP
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IELTS essay Describer A PERFECT PLACE TO STUDY

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  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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