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Describe your role in the work place in the Directorate General of Taxation

As an Account Representative in The Directorate General of Taxation, my main role is analyzing taxpayers financial report and supervising taxpayers obligations based on Indonesian tax law. Furthermore, together with my team, we are tackling tax avoidance and Base Erosion Profit Shifting issues such as transfer pricing, tax haven utilization, thin capitalization, and digital transaction. In order to give a certainty to the taxpayers, we continuously respond to the taxpayers cases through verbal and written confirmation letter based on the tax regulation. Finally, we are responsible for analyzing tax revenue potential and projecting tax revenue based on prior year data.
As an Account Representative in The Directorate General of Taxation, my main role is analyzing
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financial report and supervising
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taxpayers
obligations based on Indonesian
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tax
law.
Furthermore
, together with my team, we are tackling
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tax
avoidance and Base Erosion Profit Shifting issues such as transfer pricing,
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tax
haven utilization, thin capitalization, and digital transaction. In order to give a certainty to the
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taxpayers
, we
continuously
respond to the
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taxpayers
cases through verbal and written confirmation letter based on the
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tax
regulation.
Finally
, we are responsible for analyzing
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tax
revenue potential and projecting
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revenue based on prior year data.
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IELTS essay Describe your role in the work place in the Directorate General of Taxation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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