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describe your favorite book

describe your favorite book n66B2

Frankly speaking, I don’t read much. Not that I don’t like reading, it’s just that I don’t have enough time to read on a regular basis. One of the books that I have recently read is called try in whirlpool by an author called Mohammad Reza Pormohammad. It is a thick factual and an unputdownable book that is was published in 1996. The story revolves around a young boy has to come to Tehran in order to work. He wants to be a teacher in the feature so he should educate. He try more to do both of the process at the same time. in this way he failed many times but he doesn’t disappointed and finally he successed. It had a profound impact on my outlook on life. I guess this book will appeal to anyone who can’t find solution in tough situations and disappointed.

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It had a profound impact on my outlook on life. I guess this book will appeal to anyone who can’t find solution in tough situations and disappointed. 

IELTS essay describe your favorite book

Essay

American English

3 paragraphs

146 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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