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Describe the time when you helped someone in your life. How did you feel when you helped them?

Describe the time when you helped someone in your life. How did you feel when you helped them? B7JxX

Last summer, my school had a charity to help people in Ha Tinh. I registed to become a volunteer and went to a village to help people here. When I had come there, I had a busy time and a memorable experience. This village had many children and elders so I must take care of them. I felt so busy and tired because I do lots of jobs. However, when I had seen smiles whose people I cared, my weariness was gone. After had helped people in this village, I felt so happiness and excited. I think that I was born again. I want to experience more and more this feeling.

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help
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people
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so
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because
 I do lots of jobs. However
, when I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 smiles whose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 I cared, my weariness was gone
. After had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
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people
 in this village, I felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happiness and excited. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I was born
 again. I want to experience more and more this feeling. 