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Describe the geography of the country wgere you currently live

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Geographically speaking, I am currently living In dry and hot climate, most of the lands of my country covered by vast deserts. On the contrary, we have other types of lands and weather especially on the north part of my nation which makes it more sutible for various kinds of plants and animals as well as people. Back to my experience, I can say that folks who are living in the south of my country are more generous and kind also have a great sense of hospitality compare to those living in the north. To sum up, it is the scientific fact that geography can effect people's behavior so if you visit my country lran you will definitely feel that.

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IELTS essay Describe the geography of the country wgere you currently live

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American English

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