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Describe a TV or radio presenter you like

Describe a TV or radio presenter you like 15gmX
With a pleasant personality, the television anchors make a berth among the audience, globally. In India, I prefer programs anchored by beautiful presenter Ayesha Faridi. Principally she is a news presenter and anchors business news events at CNBC TV18 and had continued with the television station since 2003 to 2010, right before joining at ET Now. She usually anchors several programs for the television channel and those include the flagship morning shows, including Power Breakfast, Your Stocks, Bull’s Eye, Bazaar, India Market Wrap, Midcap Radar, The Market and First Trades, few afternoon shows, Market @ Lunch, Riding The Bull, The F&O Show etc. She presents the news and information on different issues and analyses the issues critically. She is also assigned to analyze sector-based reports, a variety of current business trends, fundamental issues of business organizations, presenting investigative reports on the local business climates, general news on finance, and sometimes she is also responsible to link with the external traders and business corporations to get information for reports and more other tasks. I am an irregular television viewer and mostly watch news only from different channels. But I frequently watch her shows particularly the morning shows. On the shows, she gravely analyses the business issues and prospects of the day for different business companies and organisation. Her micro and macro level analysis help to get ideas about the business situations of any specific company. She analyses the facts with proper information and in some cases, she interviews different renowned business people or economists to bring out the hidden facts and analyse them before the audience. She never presents any news or information without any proper reference and keeps the record too for future use. As a business journalist, market analysing expert and television anchor, she mostly discusses the business issues in her shows. She talks about different aspects, the past present and the future of any specific business corporation. Sometimes the discussions become lively and help investors to decide over taking decisions including raising the investment or improving the products conditions and more other relevant phases. Since the discussions are based on the business and the current context, the business people get ideas to resolve their troubles. Mostly the renowned corporations and multinational companies are the regular audiences of her events. Not only she presents the news, she also takes expert opinions for the betterment of any specific sector which is also a beneficial factor for her audience. I like Ayesha Faridi than any other news presenters for her superb personality and news presentation style. When she speaks, she speaks very clearly. Her pronunciation both the Hindi and English words are adorable and appear natural, and free of all local tones. Moreover, she always picks the best among the experts to opine in her show so that the audience could have a real scenario of the situation and the expert suggestions to recover. Airing time is another fact behind preferring her shows. All her shows are aired at the perfect time when people need it best. Most of the shows begin in the morning when people (especially the businessmen) prepare to get out of the home. After watching the early morning analysis on the television show, they could take the necessary decisions for the day.
With a pleasant personality, the
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television
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anchors
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make
a berth among the
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audience
, globally. In India, I prefer programs anchored by
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beautiful
presenter Ayesha
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Faridi
.

Principally
she is a
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news
presenter and
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anchors
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business
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news
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events
at CNBC TV18 and had continued with the
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television
station since 2003 to 2010, right
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before
joining at ET
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Now
. She
usually
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anchors
several programs for the
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television
channel and those include the flagship
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morning
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shows
, including Power Breakfast, Your Stocks, Bull’s Eye, Bazaar, India
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Market
Wrap,
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Midcap
Radar, The
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Market
and
First
Trades, few afternoon
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shows
,
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Market
@ Lunch, Riding The Bull, The
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F&O
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Show
etc. She
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presents
the
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news
and
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information
on
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different
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issues
and
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analyses
the
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issues
critically
.
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She
is
also
assigned to
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analyze
sector-based reports, a variety of
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current
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business
trends, fundamental
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issues
of
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business
organizations, presenting investigative reports on the local
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business
climates, general
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news
on finance, and
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sometimes
she is
also
responsible to link with the external traders and
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business
corporations to
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get
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information
for reports and more other tasks.

I am an irregular
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television
viewer and
mostly
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watch
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news
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only
from
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different
channels.
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But
I
frequently
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watch
her
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shows
particularly
the
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morning
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shows
. On the
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shows
, she
gravely
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analyses
the
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business
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issues
and prospects of the day for
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different
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business
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companies
and
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organisation
. Her micro and macro level analysis
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help
to
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get
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ideas
about the
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business
situations of any specific
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company
. She
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analyses
the facts with proper
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information
and in
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some
cases, she interviews
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different
renowned
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business
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people
or economists to bring out the hidden facts and
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analyse
them
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before
the
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audience
. She never
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presents
any
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news
or
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information
without any proper reference and
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keeps
the record too for future
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use
.

As a
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business
journalist,
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market
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analysing
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expert
and
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television
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anchor
, she
mostly
discusses the
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business
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issues
in her
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shows
. She talks about
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different
aspects, the past
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present
and the future of any specific
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business
corporation.
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Sometimes
the discussions become lively and
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help
investors to decide over taking decisions including raising the investment or improving the products conditions and more other relevant phases. Since the discussions
are based
on the
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business
and the
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current
context, the
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business
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people
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get
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ideas
to resolve their troubles.
Mostly
the renowned corporations and multinational
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companies
are the regular
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audiences
of her
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events
. Not
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only
she
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presents
the
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news
, she
also
takes
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expert
opinions for the betterment of any specific sector which is
also
a beneficial factor for her audience.

I like Ayesha
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Faridi
than any other
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news
presenters for her superb personality and
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news
presentation style. When she speaks, she speaks
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very
clearly
. Her pronunciation both the Hindi and English words are adorable and appear natural, and free of all local tones.
Moreover
, she always picks the best among the
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experts
to opine in her
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show
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so
that the
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audience
could have a real scenario of the situation and the
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expert
suggestions to recover. Airing time is another fact behind preferring her
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shows
. All her
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shows
are aired
at the perfect time when
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people
need it best. Most of the
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shows
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begin
in the
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morning
when
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people
(
especially
the businessmen) prepare to
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get
out of the home. After watching the early
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morning
analysis on the
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television
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show
, they could take the necessary decisions for the day.
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IELTS essay Describe a TV or radio presenter you like

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
545 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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