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Describe a journey [e.g. by car, plane, boat] that you remember well.

Describe a journey [e. g. by car, plane, boat] that you remember well. KwydN
WI'm going to talk about an excursion which I went to travel to a foreign country last year. this is Thai Lan. Firstly, I travelled by plane, it took me 2 hours to arrive. Secondly, I felt very nervous and excited which I looked forward about this trip. Actually, it wasn't disappointed for me. Thai Lan is stunning, I'm really broadening my horizons and attracted by animate/bustling this city modern. During the trip, I used public transport instead of private vehicles for the commuting costs is cheap. As well, I saw a lot of people to includes local and overseas people when I went sight-seeing. they are very intimate and wonderful, we created plenty of intrigue conversation. besides that, I'm experienced different cultures and traditions and learned a new language. More importantly, I arrived in popular tourist destinations/famous tourist attractions which is attracted millions of tourists and saw spectacular landscapes, wildlife, and plants. Nevertheless, the recent development of industry was a result in posing a serious threat to the environment and destroy natural habitats. Finally, I'd like to say that Thai Lan was a great way to relax and reduce stress and brought a wide range of benefits for me. I think it was the best journey I've ever
WI'm going to talk about an excursion which I went to travel to a foreign country last year.
this
is Thai
Lan
.
Firstly
, I travelled by
plane
, it took me 2 hours to arrive.
Secondly
, I felt
very
nervous and excited which I looked forward about this trip. Actually, it wasn't disappointed for me. Thai
Lan
is stunning, I'm
really
broadening my horizons and attracted by animate/bustling this city modern. During the trip, I
used
public transport
instead
of private vehicles for the commuting costs is
cheap
.
As well
, I
saw
a lot of
people
to
includes
local and overseas
people
when I went sight-seeing.
they
are
very
intimate and wonderful, we created
plenty
of intrigue conversation.
besides
that, I'm experienced
different
cultures and traditions and learned a new language. More
importantly
, I arrived in popular tourist destinations/
famous
tourist attractions which
is attracted
millions of tourists and
saw
spectacular landscapes, wildlife, and plants.
Nevertheless
, the recent development of industry was a result in posing a serious threat to the environment and
destroy
natural habitats.
Finally
, I'd like to say that Thai
Lan
was a great way to relax and
reduce
stress
and brought a wide range of benefits for me. I
think
it was the best journey I've
ever
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IELTS essay Describe a journey [e. g. by car, plane, boat] that you remember well.

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