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Describe a job or a career you have or hope to have

Describe a job or a career you have or hope to have G36mj
Since childhood, I wanted to become a translator, so I followed the English major to realize my dream profession. First of all, a translator is someone who does the work related to translating written text from one language into another without changing its meaning. Next, to pursue this career I need to have good foreign language ability; need skills to look up information quickly and accurately; It is necessary to translate closely to the original to avoid external influences on the translation. I love the idea of getting involed in a challenging work that will allow me to use determination, quick thinking, carefulness and perseverance. and curious to do something that can make an impression and attract readers. The career as a distinguished translator seems to the perfect opportunity to my vision, aspiration and goodwill to serve all people to know foreign works much more and leave lasting translations. Challenges, excitement, earning a lot of money, opportunities and the mindset of wanting to do and discover something new every day are the main reasons why I am interested in my career in the field of translation. The stint of a translator also demands the person to serve as a network and take lots of challenges and I have a great passion for both.
Since childhood, I wanted to become a
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,
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I followed the English major to realize my dream profession.

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First of all
, a
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is someone who does the work related to translating written text from one language into another without changing its meaning.
Next
, to pursue this career I need to have
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good
foreign language ability; need
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skills
to look up information
quickly
and
accurately
; It is necessary to translate
closely
to the original to avoid external influences on the translation.

I
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love
the
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idea
of getting
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involed
in a challenging work that will
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allow
me to
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use
determination, quick thinking, carefulness and perseverance.
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and
curious to do something that can
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make
an impression and attract readers. The career as a distinguished
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translator
seems to the perfect opportunity to my vision, aspiration and goodwill to serve all
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people
to know foreign works much more and
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leave
lasting translations.

Challenges, excitement, earning
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a lot of
money, opportunities and the mindset of wanting to do and discover something new every day are the main reasons why I
am interested
in my career in the field of translation. The stint of a
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translator
also
demands the person to serve as a network and take lots of challenges and I have a great passion for both.
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IELTS essay Describe a job or a career you have or hope to have

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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