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Culture is turning same around the world. What are the reasons. Explain its positive and negative aspects?

Culture is turning same around the world. What are the reasons. Explain its positive and negative aspects? mROO

Without an iota of doubt, people has started adopting some culture around the global. There are enormous reasons behind this transformation. I believe that amalgamation of different cultures has its own merits along with demerits. With an initiation of 21st century, preferences of an individuals have also drastically increased. Therefore, people has started migrating from developing to developed nations, which enables an individual to adapt culture and tradition of other nations. With the/a surge of competition in the market, foreign work culture has been accepting over a past years, which helps organizations to make themselves competent enough to survive in this soaring heat of competition. Not only this, people are attracted, especially the youngsters, towards the western culture and traditions, such as food, clothing and other lifestyles. Consequently, similar atmosphere can be seen in the world. Furthermore, discrimination and racism can be reduce with the amalgamation of various cultures in the society. When it comes to monetary purposes, government bodies can also save the extra expenses, which usually spend on organizing numerous cultural events and occasions. On the other hand, acceptance of same culture in the society can reduce the count of travellors, which lead to less influx of revenue into the country, resulting into poor economy and also leads to 'financial stability crisis'. Indeed, it becomes difficult for people to maintain the significance of their root history, that can be loose with the adoption of same culture. Undoubtedly, myriad reasons of accepting similar culture around the world, which has its own advantages and disadvantages

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only
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 the youngsters, towards the western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
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cultures
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government
 bodies can also
 save the extra expenses, which usually
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events
 and occasions.

On the other hand
, acceptance of same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
 in the society can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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, which lead to less influx of revenue into the country, resulting into poor economy and also
 leads to 'financial stability crisis'. Indeed
, it becomes difficult for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to maintain the significance of their root history, that can be loose with the adoption of same culture.

Undoubtedly
, myriad reasons of accepting similar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfashionartabilitysciencepracticeexperience
culture
 around the world, which has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 advantages and disadvantages