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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. g39A
Friends are a beautiful gift of god people share their problems and emotions with them. Some people believe friends with a similar mindset are better, whereas others think that disagreement in opinions are beneficial for a better decision making. This essay will discuss why similar way of thinking among friends is important but why difference in opinions hold a significant importance in companionship. While making friends some people are looking for like minded people who share common interest, it can be related to any choices such as fashion style, sports, hobbies name but a few. As similar minded people have greater level of understanding which will eventually strong the bond of friendship. People with similar mentality can assist each other to recover from any emotional loss at a higher pace than others. Therefore, some people wanted to have similar minded friends as compared to an indifferent one. Conversely, a number of people think friends with different opinion is the true representation of friendship. Because diversity in views can enhance the knowledge about a certain problem, and it is essential in shaping the overall behavior. Furthermore, companionship without debatable discussion would be boring. When I was a university student I had a debatable discussion with my friend that finance as a subject is useless and it should be excluded from the curriculum, he present valid argument which changes my perception in a positive way. Therefore, dissimilar mentality is vital to make a better decision. In conclusion, friends are wonderful companion who help in the ups and downs of life. This essay argued that why similar mindset friends have a better emotional understanding but why unlike mindset friends are better guiders. In my opinion, both type of friends are needed to cope up the different issue of life.
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are a
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gift of god
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people
share their problems and emotions with them.
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believe
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with a
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similar
mindset are
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better
, whereas others
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think
that disagreement in
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opinions
are beneficial for a
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better
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decision making
. This essay will discuss why
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similar
way of thinking among
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friends
is
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important
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but
why difference in
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opinions
hold a significant importance in companionship.

While making
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friends
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some
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people
are looking for
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like minded
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people
who share common interest, it can
be related
to any choices such as fashion style, sports, hobbies name
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but
a few.
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similar
minded
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people
have greater level of understanding which will
eventually
strong the bond of friendship.
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with
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similar
mentality can assist each other to recover from any emotional loss at a higher pace than others.
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,
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some
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people
wanted to have
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similar
minded
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friends
as compared to an indifferent one.

Conversely
, a number of
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people
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think
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friends
with
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different
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opinion
is the true representation of friendship.
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Because
diversity in views can enhance the knowledge about a certain problem, and it is essential in shaping the
overall
behavior.
Furthermore
, companionship without debatable discussion would be boring. When I was a university student I had a debatable discussion with my
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friend
that finance as a subject is useless and it should
be excluded
from the curriculum, he present valid argument which
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changes
my perception in a
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positive
way.
Therefore
, dissimilar mentality is vital to
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make
a
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better
decision.

In conclusion
,
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friends
are wonderful companion who
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help
in the ups and downs of life. This essay argued that why
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similar
mindset
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friends
have a
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better
emotional understanding
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but
why unlike mindset
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friends
are
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better
guiders. In my
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opinion
, both type of
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friends
are needed
to cope up the
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different
issue of life.
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IELTS essay Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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