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Cue card meet new people who I meet daily

There are a lot of people who I meet daily, Some of them are my known and some are new. • There have been many instances where I have come across new people in my life but i want to talk about a strange situation where I first met this person named Rajni sharma. • She is in her late 30’s and I met her in a very unexpected situation. • This heads back to last winter when I was going for a trip with my friends. • It was very chilly and time was around 9: 30 in the morning. • Our destination was about 9 hours away and we all were travelling by a private mini bus that we booked. • When me and my friends were about to reach our destination when our bus broke down. • We were told to visit some village nearby in the meantime till our bus was being repaired. • My friends refused to come with me so I went alone to the village to explore new things. • I was walking down the streets of the village and after some time I heard a group of children reciting poems very loudly. • As soon as I went there I saw a lady in a very simple yet beautiful saree teaching children and upon asking the villagers I got to know that Mrs. Rajni was teaching those children who could not afford to go to school. • My respect for her doubled when i had a word with her after her class where she told me that she was actually a doctor by profession and she had herself opted for this life, to not only teach children but also do her duties as a doctor by providing whole village medicinal care. • I sat with her for almost an hour, she was a very welcoming person and talked very politely. • At that moment, seeing so many children getting their basic education I felt like doing this myself too. • If not on those levels I promised her to help her in some way I could. • I kept on thinking about this scenario for very long. • So till date i send her some amount of money which I save and she buys those children basic stationary with that. • Mrs. Rajni is a perfect example of a selfless person. I believe that not everyone has this much strength to look upto life this way.
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want to talk about a strange situation where I
first
met this person named Rajni sharma.

• She is in her late 30’s and I met her in a
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unexpected situation.

• This heads back to last winter when I was going for a trip with my friends.

• It was
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very
chilly and time was around 9: 30 in the morning.

• Our destination was about 9 hours away and we all were travelling by a private mini bus

that we booked.

• When me and my friends were about to reach our destination when our bus broke down.

• We were
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told
to visit
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some
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nearby in the meantime till our bus was
being repaired
.

• My friends refused to
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come
with me
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I went alone to the
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village
to explore new things.

• I was walking down the streets of the
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village
and after
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time I heard a group of

children reciting poems
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as I went there I
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a lady in a
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simple
yet
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saree teaching children

and upon asking the villagers I
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to know that Mrs. Rajni was teaching those
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children
who

could not afford to go to school.

• My respect for her doubled when i had a word with her after her
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class
where she
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me

that she was actually a doctor by profession and she had herself opted for this life, to not

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teach
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do her duties as a doctor by providing whole
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medicinal

care.

• I sat with her for almost an hour, she was a
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welcoming person and talked
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politely
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• At that moment, seeing
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getting their basic education I felt like doing this

myself too.

• If not on those levels I promised her to
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help
her in
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way I could.

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on thinking about this scenario for
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long.

•
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till date i
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her
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amount of money which I save and she
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those
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basic

stationary with that.

• Mrs. Rajni is a perfect example of a selfless person. I believe that not everyone has this

much strength to look upto life this way.
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IELTS essay Cue card meet new people who I meet daily

Essay
  American English
30 paragraphs
414 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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