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Cue card - describe an aquatic animal whom you find very interesting.

Cue card - describe an aquatic animal whom you find very interesting. amdY
India is a diverse country there are pet animals, domestic animals and wild animals but here I am going to talk about an aquatic animal who lives in water for all of its lifetime it is anas it has a bulbous had under two big eyes and eight arms which help it to grab things and taste things well I haven't quite in a knowledge about octopus before visiting to Delhi last month I went to Delhi to visit my one of my friend who lives in Delhi and he and she is very fond of sound of animals parts and birds she is a bird lover and she told that she has recently bought a watch hand octopus which is a baby octopus it is very cute and lovely I saw that octopus and I get I got to know about some qualities of octopus such as octopus can I use inka flute 2km frog a flock their selves from that they can change your body with their surrounding such as they can change your body colour like pink brown grey and many more I find it very interesting due to its brilliant mind and I clicked the some photos of that octopus and I also shared that a photos with my kith and kin so that they can also get only about the octopus so this was this is an aquatic animal whom I find octopus I find it interesting.
India is a diverse country there are pet
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animals
, domestic
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animals
and wild
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animals
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but
here I am going to talk about an aquatic
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animal
who
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lives
in water for all of its lifetime it is
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anas
it has a bulbous had under two
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big
eyes and eight arms which
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help
it to grab things and taste things well I haven't quite in a knowledge about
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octopus
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before
visiting to Delhi last month I went to Delhi to visit my one of my friend who
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lives
in
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Delhi and
he and she is
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very
fond of sound of
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animals
parts and birds she is a bird
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lover and
she
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told
that she has recently
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bought
a
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watch
hand
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octopus
which is a baby
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octopus
it is
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very
cute and lovely I
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saw
that
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octopus
and I
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get
I
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got
to know about
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some
qualities of
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octopus
such as
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octopus
can I
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use
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inka
flute
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2km
frog a flock their selves from that they can
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change
your body with their surrounding such as they can
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change
your body
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colour
like pink brown
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grey
and
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many
more I find it
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very
interesting due to its brilliant mind and I clicked the
Did you mean "same"?
some
photos of that
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octopus
and I
also
shared that a
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photos with my kith
and kin
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so
that they can
also
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get
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only
about the
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octopus
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so
this was this is an aquatic
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animal
whom I find
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octopus
I find it interesting.
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IELTS essay Cue card - describe an aquatic animal whom you find very interesting.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
242 words
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