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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.7

Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. with this opinion? v. 7
In the past few decades, creative artists were given the freedom to express their artistic ideas without interruption. Some people argue that creativity should also have some limitations and others believe that creativity should not have restrictions. In my view, I partially agree that there should be rules and restrictions to avoid further complications. Firstly, creativity is a gift and this skill is not acquired by many, yet the concept should be polite and pleasing to everyone; however, many sculptures and painters tried to communicate or pass on information from generations to generations through profession. For example, many creative artists like Leonardo Da Vinci encouraged many young artists to draw inspirations. Needless to say, craft can communicate many feelings and emotions, where words cannot express and the feelings are beyond comprehension. Secondly, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of an invention. Many films have certification boards to certify its content to check violence and nudity in film making. For instance, the Joker character in the Batman series inspired many to commit crime in real life. Similarly, graffiti is banned in Australia because some portrait work criticise racially and can lead to violence. Hence, creation should be in limits and governing bodies should enforce some rules. In conclusion, we can clearly understand that creativity should have restrictions and the content should be user friendly. However, freedom to express is not always beneficial to the society because social responsibility to not hurt others play a key role in innovations in creators. Hence, the role of creative restrictions is too dire to ignore.
In the past few decades, creative artists were
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given
the freedom to express their artistic
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ideas
without interruption.
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Some
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people
argue that creativity should
also
have
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some
limitations
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and others
believe that creativity should not have
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restrictions
. In my view, I
partially
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agree
that there should be
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rules
and
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restrictions
to avoid
further
complications.

Firstly
, creativity is a gift and this
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skill
is not acquired by
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many
,
yet
the concept should be polite and pleasing to everyone;
however
,
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many
sculptures and painters tried to communicate or pass on information from generations to generations through profession.
For example
,
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many
creative artists like
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Leonardo Da Vinci
encouraged
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many
young artists to draw inspirations. Needless to say, craft can communicate
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many
feelings and emotions, where words cannot express and the feelings are beyond comprehension.

Secondly
, there are
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some
pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of an invention.
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Many
films have certification boards to certify its content to
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check
violence and nudity in film making.
For instance
, the Joker character in the Batman series inspired
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
to commit crime in real life.
Similarly
, graffiti
is banned
in Australia
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because
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some
portrait work
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criticise
racially
and can lead to violence.
Hence
, creation should be in limits and governing bodies should enforce
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
.

In conclusion
, we can
clearly
understand that creativity should have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restrictions
and the content should be
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user friendly
.
However
, freedom to express is not always beneficial to the society
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
social responsibility to not hurt others play a key role in innovations in creators.
Hence
, the role of creative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restrictions
is too dire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. with this opinion? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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