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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT? l7p01
Nowadays, World has become a global village through enormous development, and countries are a lot similar in many ways. People can have access and buy the same product available in another part of the World which is not available in their countries. This statement has many positive impacts on global advancement than negative as this can save time, build global connection. Firstly, this idea of globalization has benefitted people in many ways. They can buy all international brands just sitting at home and ordering a miles away product to their doorstep. Many people these days, due to lack of employment, have involved themselves in online businesses and help buyers connect them with international sellers; this doesn't benefit the sellers but also the buyers. For example, If a person wants to buy an international brands shirt that is not available in their country, they can order it online and get the stuff without the hassle of travelling to that country. In addition to this, Japan has famous car selling companies, one of the well known is Toyota, which has many outlets in the World. It is much more helpful for people around the World to buy these branded cars without wasting travel expenses to Japan. Another reason for this increasing globalization is that it reduces the homesickness of foreigners to a particular country by just finding out their favourite cuisine. For instance, the Chinese can have their traditional dishes even though they live in Pakistan, America, or the UK. To conclude, globalization and similar way to live in different countries have made life far luxurious and more comfortable than in the past, despite some problems. So I hope this phenomenon is likely to continue with more acceptance among people.
Nowadays,
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World
has become a global village through enormous development, and
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countries
are a lot similar in
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ways.
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People
can have access and
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buy
the same product available in another part of the
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World
which is not available in their
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countries
. This statement has
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many
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positive
impacts on global advancement than
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negative
as this can save time, build global connection.

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, this
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idea
of globalization has
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benefitted
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people
in
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many
ways. They can
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buy
all international brands
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just
sitting at home and ordering a miles away product to their doorstep.
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Many
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people
these days, due to lack of employment, have involved themselves in online businesses and
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help
buyers connect them with international sellers; this doesn't benefit the sellers
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but
also
the buyers.
For example
, If a person wants to
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buy
an international brands shirt
that is
not available in their
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country
, they can order it online and
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get
the stuff without the hassle of travelling to that country.

In addition
to this, Japan has
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famous
car selling
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companies
, one of the well known is Toyota, which has
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many
outlets in the
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World
. It is much more helpful for
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people
around the
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World
to
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buy
these branded cars without wasting travel expenses to Japan.

Another reason for this increasing globalization is that it
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reduces
the homesickness of foreigners to a particular
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country
by
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just
finding out their
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favourite
cuisine.
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, the Chinese can have their traditional dishes
even though
they
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live
in Pakistan, America, or the UK.

To conclude
, globalization and similar way to
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live
in
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different
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countries
have made life far luxurious and more comfortable than in the past, despite
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some
problems.
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So
I hope this phenomenon is likely to continue with more acceptance among
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people
.
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IELTS essay Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. DO YOU THINK THIS IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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